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9/3/2010 c1 6Zia Montrose
After a quick check of your profile, I got sucked into reading this story. It's wonderful. I love stories where Lily is forced to reexamine her feelings for James. It was the first line that drew me in because I, too, have always thought James must have an affinity for the smell of grass.

I love your descriptions of flight and this line, "For the first time in her life she didn't think Potter was being arrogant or a show off." Nice one.
12/29/2009 c1 1phoenix008
I can not believe that this wonderful story has not received a review yet. it's good to see lily finally opening her eyes to see what's always been right in front of her. love how you captured james and how much he loves flying! good job!

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