for All for a Cup of Ramen
193/6/2017 c1 Agrithnum-aut
Sexualization of a character doesn't count as romance in the least. The story is too fast paced, and there is next to no. you'd up in any sort of way. Please, revise your work, get advice, and think before you type. Then, edit, get it beta'd, and move on.
Sexualization of a character doesn't count as romance in the least. The story is too fast paced, and there is next to no. you'd up in any sort of way. Please, revise your work, get advice, and think before you type. Then, edit, get it beta'd, and move on.
5/23/2014 c1 Daniel
Good. Good. Could you make some more naruto x ayame stories.
Good. Good. Could you make some more naruto x ayame stories.
5/23/2012 c1 ero-sanin
hot damn that was 1 of the best sexy story yet.
hot damn that was 1 of the best sexy story yet.
1/10/2012 c1 Sergeant Gross
Short, but cool. Btw why did Naruto only eat two bowls of ramen? Normally he eats way more XD
Short, but cool. Btw why did Naruto only eat two bowls of ramen? Normally he eats way more XD
8/5/2011 c1 fallenangel2012
very good, grammar was bad but it diddnt hinder the story keep up the good work
very good, grammar was bad but it diddnt hinder the story keep up the good work
11/18/2010 c1 I review old stories
dialouge needs punctuation too!
dialouge needs punctuation too!
6/11/2010 c1 fgb
grammar sucked and it's Ayame not Amaye.
grammar sucked and it's Ayame not Amaye.
6/10/2010 c1 Sage Naruto25
l only have one word to say to you. HOT!
l only have one word to say to you. HOT!