
5/6/2013 c10 IDeletedThisAccItIsDeadWillNev
Awesome story, I can't wait to read more! I kind of actually like the idea of rose turning strigoi it's probably really hard to write in a strigoi's POV.
Awesome story, I can't wait to read more! I kind of actually like the idea of rose turning strigoi it's probably really hard to write in a strigoi's POV.
11/4/2010 c10 dhampire6
will you be continuing this story? its real good so far i would like to read more... :)
will you be continuing this story? its real good so far i would like to read more... :)
8/5/2010 c10
39Kalyra-Anne
Oh my freaking Gawd !
I love this so much - the only thing i'd suggest is longer chapters...
Please UPDATE!
You have an addicted reader!
=)
Xx

Oh my freaking Gawd !
I love this so much - the only thing i'd suggest is longer chapters...
Please UPDATE!
You have an addicted reader!
=)
Xx
7/14/2010 c10 You-Know-U-Luv-MeXOXO
Good story!UD soon!Cuz i no that i want 2 hear the rest!RosexDimitri 4evr...soz 2 all Adrian fans i mean i like him but i prefer Rose and Dimitri
Good story!UD soon!Cuz i no that i want 2 hear the rest!RosexDimitri 4evr...soz 2 all Adrian fans i mean i like him but i prefer Rose and Dimitri
5/31/2010 c10
2xxxIxLovexReadingxxx
It was a good chapter, considering it was, like, 13 lines...
Seriously, you really need to stop doing that - writing so short chapters and updating so rarely.
People will stop reading your story eventually. I understand if you don't have the time, but maybe you should at least try to write longer chapters.
Love,
xxxIxLovexReadingxxx

It was a good chapter, considering it was, like, 13 lines...
Seriously, you really need to stop doing that - writing so short chapters and updating so rarely.
People will stop reading your story eventually. I understand if you don't have the time, but maybe you should at least try to write longer chapters.
Love,
xxxIxLovexReadingxxx
5/31/2010 c10
1iluvMomiji
CAN U MAKE HER GO SEE LISA PLZ! AND CAN U MAKE HE ESCAPE SO DIMITRI RACES AFTER HER AND HE'S REALLY ANGRY!PLZ HURRY! AND DO ANOTHER CHAPTER

CAN U MAKE HER GO SEE LISA PLZ! AND CAN U MAKE HE ESCAPE SO DIMITRI RACES AFTER HER AND HE'S REALLY ANGRY!PLZ HURRY! AND DO ANOTHER CHAPTER
5/29/2010 c6 AnnabelleSilvermist3
I think you need to make the chapters longer. other than that the story's great. please think about making it longer and adding more detail not to be rude
I think you need to make the chapters longer. other than that the story's great. please think about making it longer and adding more detail not to be rude
5/21/2010 c1
6archive222
this is really kool. :) Im writing a story a bit like this, but i read this after i started writing it. i read this for inspiration. if you can, please check out my story 'In this Life'. Thanks. I read all 9 chapters. UPDATE SOON!

this is really kool. :) Im writing a story a bit like this, but i read this after i started writing it. i read this for inspiration. if you can, please check out my story 'In this Life'. Thanks. I read all 9 chapters. UPDATE SOON!
3/20/2010 c9
1iluvMomiji
omg omg omg omg, WHAT ABOUT LISA AND ADRIAN AND THE OTHERS! cry cry cry, please hurry up and do another chapter!

omg omg omg omg, WHAT ABOUT LISA AND ADRIAN AND THE OTHERS! cry cry cry, please hurry up and do another chapter!