for Like Two Puzzle Pieces9/23/2013 c1 
41miss skinny love
I've played this game- but I used cheats. XD
Lol, anywho...love the feels. Ratchet and Clank DO need to realise how important they are together...well done in the way you portrayed that! (:
P.S; awesome profile pic... :P
41miss skinny loveI've played this game- but I used cheats. XD
Lol, anywho...love the feels. Ratchet and Clank DO need to realise how important they are together...well done in the way you portrayed that! (:
P.S; awesome profile pic... :P
9/19/2011 c1 4jacrispyv
Lovely story! Though I know nothing of this fandom, your story is still very good. Thanks for your review! Keep up the nice work. :D
4jacrispyvLovely story! Though I know nothing of this fandom, your story is still very good. Thanks for your review! Keep up the nice work. :D
7/26/2010 c1 15ALICE IT'S RAINing
this does a good job at showing the bond between ratchet and clank, well done
bye
15ALICE IT'S RAINingthis does a good job at showing the bond between ratchet and clank, well done
bye
1/4/2010 c1 17Wrenchy
Okay, so I've read through this, and for the most part it's okay. One thing I really recommend is proofreading over your stuff, because I found quite a few grammatical errors littered throughout this oneshot. As well, try not to use transitions that use words. I use "-" when I want to time skip myself.
This is a great start, and I really want to see some more R&C work from you.
17WrenchyOkay, so I've read through this, and for the most part it's okay. One thing I really recommend is proofreading over your stuff, because I found quite a few grammatical errors littered throughout this oneshot. As well, try not to use transitions that use words. I use "-" when I want to time skip myself.
This is a great start, and I really want to see some more R&C work from you.
1/4/2010 c1 browntiger
Wow. What a beautiful story. I like the details you added like how Ratchet and Clank supplement each other. I love those characters. I'm glad they finally hugged. The last thing Orvus said really hit me hard. Who wants us to do what makes us feel whole? Our own fathers.
Wow. What a beautiful story. I like the details you added like how Ratchet and Clank supplement each other. I love those characters. I'm glad they finally hugged. The last thing Orvus said really hit me hard. Who wants us to do what makes us feel whole? Our own fathers.