for Warmth4/13/2012 c1 
33Sinceslicedbread
This was warm, insightful and informative. I always thought their first time came out of nowhere. This provided me with reasoning. Good job :)
33SinceslicedbreadThis was warm, insightful and informative. I always thought their first time came out of nowhere. This provided me with reasoning. Good job :)
2/1/2012 c1 2belgianboy
This is a stunningly erotic play-by-play of the first night in the tent-very visceral, very realistic. I especially like the groggy half-thoughts and Jack's instinctive panic about losing Ennis if he doesn't let this happen. Nicely done!
2belgianboyThis is a stunningly erotic play-by-play of the first night in the tent-very visceral, very realistic. I especially like the groggy half-thoughts and Jack's instinctive panic about losing Ennis if he doesn't let this happen. Nicely done!
4/2/2010 c1 463890274637
wow-excellent writing. The sex scene was erotic but dog deep into the depth of emotion that accompanies such intimacy. Well done
wow-excellent writing. The sex scene was erotic but dog deep into the depth of emotion that accompanies such intimacy. Well done
2/6/2010 c1 oranges.all.zip
I really liked that! I was wondering at the suddenness of that first tent scene as well - and I think that Jack would really have been thinking these things and that this explains it all. And goes into more detail than the movie did ;)
Thank you for writing this!
I really liked that! I was wondering at the suddenness of that first tent scene as well - and I think that Jack would really have been thinking these things and that this explains it all. And goes into more detail than the movie did ;)
Thank you for writing this!
1/14/2010 c1 12gothica vanessa
i really REALLY liked it :) :) :)
originally meant to switch to Ennis' POV for the second half.. but Jack wanted his full say.. chattery lad, he is.
- that made me LAUGH pretty hard :)
thanks for sharing :)
vanessa
12gothica vanessai really REALLY liked it :) :) :)
originally meant to switch to Ennis' POV for the second half.. but Jack wanted his full say.. chattery lad, he is.
- that made me LAUGH pretty hard :)
thanks for sharing :)
vanessa