12/31/2021 c1 Guest
Lelouch Lamperouge isn't his real name so he shouldn't die right?
Lelouch Lamperouge isn't his real name so he shouldn't die right?
6/28/2019 c1 7AstoriaPheonix
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the voice is MEEEEE ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
the power of fanfic is REALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSS
8/25/2018 c1 Guest
welp L put em both in checkmate
welp L put em both in checkmate
3/1/2017 c1 Mrs. Skeptic
I don't think the characters would act like that even in lelouches dreams.
I don't think the characters would act like that even in lelouches dreams.
2/12/2017 c1 NNinja
Simple story, not bad but one mistake. Lelouch's real name is NOT Lelouch Lamperouge, it's Lelouch Vi Brittania. Since Lamperouge is an alias, Death note wouldn't work.
Simple story, not bad but one mistake. Lelouch's real name is NOT Lelouch Lamperouge, it's Lelouch Vi Brittania. Since Lamperouge is an alias, Death note wouldn't work.
6/15/2016 c1 CrayonPencil
But Lelouch never said his real name. And to Light he said Lelouch Lamperouge . His real name is Lelouch vi Britannia right?
But Lelouch never said his real name. And to Light he said Lelouch Lamperouge . His real name is Lelouch vi Britannia right?
6/7/2016 c1 5TooneyDeadlyFireDragon
YAAAAAAAAY LELOUCH! Thank you for killing Kira! I was so proud of Lelouch in this story, great work :D
YAAAAAAAAY LELOUCH! Thank you for killing Kira! I was so proud of Lelouch in this story, great work :D
5/30/2016 c1 someone
A Flaw as lelouch lamperage is not his real name
A Flaw as lelouch lamperage is not his real name
5/30/2016 c1 someone
He never gave out his real name as Lelouch lamperage is just a alias
He never gave out his real name as Lelouch lamperage is just a alias
5/15/2016 c1 torikoluffynatsu1610
Amazing fanfic !
Although it is true that Light is always a whiny bitch before he dies ; Couldnt you have made him fight back a little more?
Amazing fanfic !
Although it is true that Light is always a whiny bitch before he dies ; Couldnt you have made him fight back a little more?
3/16/2016 c1 Wilson
Sorry my english :There were many spelling mistakes but here are some thoughts from an author zangetsu which makes a lot of sense why Lelouch is better than Kira :
"Kira was above all a villain, you see the anime all the time thinking how this guy will turn around? how it will get out of this? And now what will he do? and do not remember the principal, he is the villain of the story!
Kira spends his last moments in decadence, desperate enters a string of absurd errors. And guess what dies!
Again, don't get me wrong, Death Note is great, wonderful in every way, the authors got, the moments of tension were striking. More our discussion here is, who was better, and I'm sorry, Kira failed, even if you consider that he became the 'god of the new world' with several followers, etc., he failed, and the authors have given the final okay for him, wouldn't change a thing.
Now what about Lelouch? Well who saw the anime knows very well, Lelouch has not failed, achieved everything, absolutely everything wanted. Won his father, he won the throne of the world, but its goal has always been to rebuild the world, and he did. He became an emperor as unfair as the father, built a wave of death and destruction, bled the whole world, created a wave of pain in the world.
He just needed to create a symbol, without going into too much detail because those who saw will understand very well. Lelouch fulfilled everything promised. He created a world where his sister could live in peace. He literally destroyed and rebuilt the world."
Moreover, for me as far as the Raito could get would be the name 'Lelouch lamperouge' which by the way is not even his real name, completely disabling the Death Note. Even the Shinigami eye is useless, as well as Kira, Zero also hides his face the mask and can activate geass opening a small slit in the mask as he did in the series. Remember that the lelouch could predict all movements, speeches and reactions of Mao and created a video to trick his movements, he could very well guide the Raito making him think he is coming to the right conclusion. And if you put the Light has only as an Assistant Misa, Lelouch has the help of Kuro no Kishi dan, or the army of Britain at his side.
Sorry my english :There were many spelling mistakes but here are some thoughts from an author zangetsu which makes a lot of sense why Lelouch is better than Kira :
"Kira was above all a villain, you see the anime all the time thinking how this guy will turn around? how it will get out of this? And now what will he do? and do not remember the principal, he is the villain of the story!
Kira spends his last moments in decadence, desperate enters a string of absurd errors. And guess what dies!
Again, don't get me wrong, Death Note is great, wonderful in every way, the authors got, the moments of tension were striking. More our discussion here is, who was better, and I'm sorry, Kira failed, even if you consider that he became the 'god of the new world' with several followers, etc., he failed, and the authors have given the final okay for him, wouldn't change a thing.
Now what about Lelouch? Well who saw the anime knows very well, Lelouch has not failed, achieved everything, absolutely everything wanted. Won his father, he won the throne of the world, but its goal has always been to rebuild the world, and he did. He became an emperor as unfair as the father, built a wave of death and destruction, bled the whole world, created a wave of pain in the world.
He just needed to create a symbol, without going into too much detail because those who saw will understand very well. Lelouch fulfilled everything promised. He created a world where his sister could live in peace. He literally destroyed and rebuilt the world."
Moreover, for me as far as the Raito could get would be the name 'Lelouch lamperouge' which by the way is not even his real name, completely disabling the Death Note. Even the Shinigami eye is useless, as well as Kira, Zero also hides his face the mask and can activate geass opening a small slit in the mask as he did in the series. Remember that the lelouch could predict all movements, speeches and reactions of Mao and created a video to trick his movements, he could very well guide the Raito making him think he is coming to the right conclusion. And if you put the Light has only as an Assistant Misa, Lelouch has the help of Kuro no Kishi dan, or the army of Britain at his side.
6/26/2015 c1 2RandomlyGenericName
Decent story, but I noticed a flaw. Lelouch Lamperouge is not his real name. His real name is Lelouch vi Brittania, and there is no way he would reveal that. Therefore, they cannot kill him. ALL HAIL LELOUCH.
Decent story, but I noticed a flaw. Lelouch Lamperouge is not his real name. His real name is Lelouch vi Brittania, and there is no way he would reveal that. Therefore, they cannot kill him. ALL HAIL LELOUCH.
6/21/2015 c2 mystoganthealmighty
hi,
i'm new to this website- and fanfics- so this is my first review.
(sorry its a negative one)
i'm gonna start off and assume that you Favor Lelouch much more than L or Light by a lot. i feel as though you portrayed L and Light quite poorly. we don't really know how well they both play chess and i would have let that one slide, but its more the fact that you made them appear dumb, or at least average minded. and i doubt Lelouch would go in for a risky move against Light like that. he didn't know how kira killed people so he wouldn't have been that confident as to pull moves like he did. but, i did enjoy the story none the less. it was a short and sweet story
hi,
i'm new to this website- and fanfics- so this is my first review.
(sorry its a negative one)
i'm gonna start off and assume that you Favor Lelouch much more than L or Light by a lot. i feel as though you portrayed L and Light quite poorly. we don't really know how well they both play chess and i would have let that one slide, but its more the fact that you made them appear dumb, or at least average minded. and i doubt Lelouch would go in for a risky move against Light like that. he didn't know how kira killed people so he wouldn't have been that confident as to pull moves like he did. but, i did enjoy the story none the less. it was a short and sweet story
7/14/2013 c1 7Risha11
This was a really awesome short fic! I love how you kept Light and L and Lelouche so in character. (OMG so many 'L's.) Anyways I really liked how it ended and how you incorporated yourself into the story without being totally random and non necessary. Great ending by the way and I think I have to agree that Lelouche would win with his geass. Again, really amazing fic.
This was a really awesome short fic! I love how you kept Light and L and Lelouche so in character. (OMG so many 'L's.) Anyways I really liked how it ended and how you incorporated yourself into the story without being totally random and non necessary. Great ending by the way and I think I have to agree that Lelouche would win with his geass. Again, really amazing fic.