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5/23/2010 c5 2Confident is my Middle Name
okay, that was real good... That line on the end, you come up with that yourself? "Life brings heartbreak, but the best way to remember someone is to not let it keep you from all you are capable of." If so its good, though i git the feeling it came from yer best friend, the 70 year old? Am i right? Feel free ta tell me I'm dead wrong... heh. Good ending, real good, but then again I'm a sucker for character deaths, I'm kinda weird that way. Funny ta see my name in it, sorta. Like i never see the name 'Devin' in anything. (or its iterations, Devon for example)
2/28/2010 c2 11SOUND-Art
I love this. Your writing flows so smoothly from scene to scene, and the characters are so *perfect*.

This is the third time I've read your Permanent Oblivion. =D
1/9/2010 c5 37XX-Samantha-XX
Was a really great story even though i knew most of it hehe (sorry about not getting back to you on the rest of the story though), just wanted to say that i loved it, and the twist i wasn't expecting :D i so thought they were going to help her recover and then she turned, well not turned but she couldn't stop herself from doing waht she did :( Great story :D
1/7/2010 c4 9Shorty McGee
*sniff* *sniff* Sorry, but one just didn't seem enough.
1/4/2010 c2 Flowerfairy30
This is a very good story. I like the way you are handling Kate's recovery. Please continue and update soon.
1/3/2010 c1 sherry57
Very mysterious. Looking forward to reading more.
1/3/2010 c1 11SOUND-Art
You write so well, that it's just..mind blowing. Your descriptions are so real, filled with life.

This story is...amazing.

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