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11/14/2011 c2 4Emmy07
Oh my gosh, the end of chapter two makes me so sad. I can already feel Norm's emotions towards it. Please post again soon. 3
7/9/2011 c2 Rain
incredible! write more!
3/27/2011 c2 moon-87119
UPDATE SOON PLEASE. Great story so far. Can't wait for the next chapter
11/13/2010 c1 6SAdqwnad59qwsa5241
Update soon please! I love this story.
6/2/2010 c2 Anaria.the.Randomer
Ahhhhh the suspense! D: I really liked this chapter... the way you linked pandora and all the futuristic stuff back to the real world, which you have changed to the point where it seems alien as well :) it just makes the whole thing relatable! :D and I like the plot, two separate cliff hangers to keep me on the edge of my seat! :D
5/3/2010 c1 13Miss.Farmgirl
You are so right, i hate that she died. Your stroy is really great to!
3/6/2010 c2 name
umm.. english please? kind of hard to follow... wait VERY hard to follow...

I REALLY WANT TO KNO WHAT HAPPENS, but i cant read this stuff, its wayy to hard! write easier!
3/4/2010 c2 always.theheartbeat
Ah this was so good. I can't wait for more, and it's okay for the long wait - everyone does that at some point or another.

Anyways! Sorry the review isn't really much of a review...I do love this chapter, don't worry about that. And I can't wait for more!
2/27/2010 c2 3TopKat90
Hi! I guess that the sister share a psycic link of some sort?

The changeing perspectives was a little hard to follow at times.

Good story though!

2/24/2010 c1 HowlingVampire05
Great story!

Can't wait for the next chapter XD
1/30/2010 c1 1Time and Fate
I really like it. Can't wait to see where it goes from here
1/28/2010 c1 Anaria.the.Randomer
wow please continue this! I really like how you're looking at both trudy and her sister rather than just trudy's view! and selfridges brother? I can tell this is going to get SO good :D
1/21/2010 c1 1UnwrittenCatalyst
Please update soon!

1/16/2010 c1 9withalittlehelpfrommyfriends
Hey! Great story. I actually just saw Avatar in IMAX today, and I would just LOVE to join the fandom. :)

So, for this challenge-I'm gonna take a well-balanced guess (which is weird for me, by the way), and say you're somewhere in high school...maybe 16-17, seeing as you have a really good vocabulary but have a young O/C.
1/10/2010 c1 extrekkie
Autumn flames.
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