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4/27/2010 c1 13iluvdimples314
Very sexy, then very sad. I liked the concept.

However, just because Jack and Ennis talk with Western accents does not mean that all of your narration should have a Western accent as well. It's distracting and unprofessional.

3/7/2010 c2 9JustEight
I loved these two. I actually prefered the first, but the two together were fantastic. The little scene you added at the end of Ennis' chapter was adorable. The last line really hit hard and really made me feel like this is something that could have happened.

Lovely job~

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