Just In
for Androids In Love

5/29/2011 c2 9Zerousy
Getting interesting.
6/13/2010 c14 Luke Skywaxer
Well, great story, Susan! I enjoyed it very much. You cover so much ground it is hard to keep up with you, but what an adventure! Where on earth do you get your ideas for plots? I like how you tied up all the loose ends. I like the nod toward "Do Androids Dream of Electric Sheep" at the end, too, by the way. (Have you ever listened to the Bare Naked Ladies' song, "When You Dream"?) Anyway, thanks for a great bit of entertainment. -Luke
6/13/2010 c12 Luke Skywaxer
Susan, I had a little trouble reading the following: "The majority of the cybernauts were still working on the doomsday machine planet killer, and they assumed that he was captured to help them in its restoration." I think I know what you mean, now, but the wording slowed me down some, not knowing who "they" were. It first seems "they" are the borg cybernauts, but then I decided you meant the protagonists.
6/13/2010 c9 Luke Skywaxer
This story has more twists than a bag of pretzels. Fajo is coming back into the story and now the Borg are planning something. What is next?
5/30/2010 c7 Luke Skywaxer
Wow, what a plot! I guess I was expecting something like this when Rayna #16 was allowed to go back where Lore was, but it is still interesting. Now, how on Ferenginar will they fix the trouble those two have caused?
5/29/2010 c6 Luke Skywaxer
Whoa. This chapter moved too quickly for me, and parts of it left me confused. Why would they allow Rayna #16 to return to the ferengi planet after having gone there only to retrieve her in the first place? Also, since I'm not an avid star trek fan I am having trouble following all the plot twists, like, what just happened? Kivas, who I thought was a minor character since you spent some time explaining his history, now turns out to have simply been a prop to get Lore into the picture, is dead. period. drowned in a matter of two paragraphs. And now these weird swirls of color just deposited everyone safely back on some ship. Will Data ever find out how to revive his daughter?
5/29/2010 c4 Luke Skywaxer
a rompously exhilarating ride so far, Susan!
5/29/2010 c3 Luke Skywaxer
This story advances quickly. I like the way you skip over some of the details to keep things moving along. For instance, we don't actually hear the Ferengi's lies or how they take Rayna to their ship and leave, but yet we understand that is what has happened.
5/29/2010 c2 Luke Skywaxer
Woo hoo, my heart is pounding for the beauty that awakens!
5/29/2010 c1 Luke Skywaxer
Susan, what a great start, although I realized from reading your story that I really know very little about the star trek fanverse. For instance, i don't even know who Quark is! I don't suppose you are trying to write for people like me, though, who would need more introduction to each character. Most readers would follow your writing very well. I was thankful, however, that you explained the Crystalline Entity.

Now I'm really interested to see what will happen next. Will the Ferengi steal Data, and will that jail bird Kivas Fajo end up owning him? Will Data be able to revive Rayna?
3/16/2010 c14 5LADYMALLARD
This was an extra ordinary story, forward and backward in time, an alternate universe and a change in history, which has to be changed back. Thrills, chills and characters from all over the Star Trek history. Everything coming full circle. I loved the way all the loose ends came together at the finish, with a happyer future for Lal and even though Data was gone as in the movie, I would hope that his look alike second brother, would be able to evolve and be integrated into the crew as his big brother was, so in a way Data would live on. It was truely insired to have both Rayna and Flint live on and finding out about Flint being Data's creator was a surprise but totaly logical, who else but the creator of such a sophisticated android as Rayna was, could have created Data. I really enjoyed this story and was glad I could read it all at once, waiting for each chapter would have been excruciating with all that was going on. Thanks for spinning a truely Great Star Trek story.
2/14/2010 c14 28Foxcat93
Great story...great ending...it was a surprise that Soong and Flint were the same person. And of course that the Raynas and Data were siblings. I loved it that Lal got to be a starship captain, but I was quite diamayed that Data waa blown up in an explosion. (sob!)
1/31/2010 c10 Foxcat93
Interesting how you weave different characters and realities from the different shows to make a new and fascinating story. The two Datas were interesting, as was Soong/Flint being the same person.
1/31/2010 c9 Foxcat93
Great story, Susan! I particularly liked the part about Flint instilling a religion program in Rayna. I can't wait to get to the part about Lal!
1/10/2010 c2 Foxcat93
I got a kick out of the Ferengi and Rayna being "Snow White and the 7 Dwarves!" Very creative!
16 Page 1 2 Next »

Desktop Mode . Twitter . Help . Sign Up . Cookies . Privacy . Terms of Service