for Muggle Fairy Tales Are Mad!9/20/2024 c12 Guest
Your Hermione and Ron and kind of caricatures of themselves. Hermione is extra clinical and insufferable and Ron is extra insensitive and foolish. Ron generally has this great effect on Hermione of lightening her up and helping her be a little less serious.
That dynamic aside, I’m really enjoying reading these stories through the trio’s perspective and I didn’t mean to be harsh or anything! They still do feel like themselves, and it’s a fun read overall! I just wanted to express that one nitpicky feeling I had. Thanks for the many chapters of good entertainment!
Your Hermione and Ron and kind of caricatures of themselves. Hermione is extra clinical and insufferable and Ron is extra insensitive and foolish. Ron generally has this great effect on Hermione of lightening her up and helping her be a little less serious.
That dynamic aside, I’m really enjoying reading these stories through the trio’s perspective and I didn’t mean to be harsh or anything! They still do feel like themselves, and it’s a fun read overall! I just wanted to express that one nitpicky feeling I had. Thanks for the many chapters of good entertainment!
8/14/2024 c1 Stacy Bews
Stick to this excellent type of fanworks please!
Not any of those ridiculous ones that feebly attempt to make Draco heroic, romantic or handsome. None of those are true of him. Fail fail fail.
Only do good stuff plez.
Stick to this excellent type of fanworks please!
Not any of those ridiculous ones that feebly attempt to make Draco heroic, romantic or handsome. None of those are true of him. Fail fail fail.
Only do good stuff plez.
2/17/2024 c45 
23Lady Shalpha
Love the Princess Bride reference
Please have Hermione tell it to them at some point
23Lady ShalphaLove the Princess Bride reference
Please have Hermione tell it to them at some point
10/11/2023 c52 636yellow 14
The bag change is of questionable believability, but otherwise very good. Keep updating
636yellow 14The bag change is of questionable believability, but otherwise very good. Keep updating
10/9/2023 c52 1setokayba2n
Well, I could imagine that the Owl could escape from a hole or a open window... Also, I could guess that Ron could not be scared too much by "The Raven"
1setokayba2nWell, I could imagine that the Owl could escape from a hole or a open window... Also, I could guess that Ron could not be scared too much by "The Raven"
10/9/2023 c1 3alix33
I wonder what would happen if Harry told Ron his Hermione impression actually sounds like Harry's Aunt Petunia.
"redhead" should be one word, alleges collinsdictionary dot com.
I snort-laughed at the fact that there are magical hair shampoo adverts where witches toss their hair in the same way Lucius Malfoy would.
LOL at Harry thinking that Hermione's voice for Goldilocks sounds like a Smurf ad that Golldilocks would look like Smurfette from now on in Harry's mind's eye.
I snort-laughed at Ron's compliment for Mother Bear because she lost all the baby weight.
My dad told toddler me in the early 1970s that the three bears went to Checkers, a South African supermarket chain that existed when I was a toddler, to buy Milo (a South powder with which to make hot or cold chocolate-flavoured milk drinks that I used to like in my bottles of milk), which is why Goldilocks could break and enter into their cottage.
3alix33I wonder what would happen if Harry told Ron his Hermione impression actually sounds like Harry's Aunt Petunia.
"redhead" should be one word, alleges collinsdictionary dot com.
I snort-laughed at the fact that there are magical hair shampoo adverts where witches toss their hair in the same way Lucius Malfoy would.
LOL at Harry thinking that Hermione's voice for Goldilocks sounds like a Smurf ad that Golldilocks would look like Smurfette from now on in Harry's mind's eye.
I snort-laughed at Ron's compliment for Mother Bear because she lost all the baby weight.
My dad told toddler me in the early 1970s that the three bears went to Checkers, a South African supermarket chain that existed when I was a toddler, to buy Milo (a South powder with which to make hot or cold chocolate-flavoured milk drinks that I used to like in my bottles of milk), which is why Goldilocks could break and enter into their cottage.
9/2/2023 c51 636yellow 14
Pretty sure that you don’t get a choice what your animagus form is. The same applies to multiple forms.
Overall a decent chapter though. But I doubt that fiendfire would go that far. Keep updating
636yellow 14Pretty sure that you don’t get a choice what your animagus form is. The same applies to multiple forms.
Overall a decent chapter though. But I doubt that fiendfire would go that far. Keep updating
9/2/2023 c51 1setokayba2n
I guess there is no greek myth that goes well, curious they did not mention how Zeus father devoured him because a prophecy... And talking about prophecies, wonder what could they think of Macbeth
1setokayba2nI guess there is no greek myth that goes well, curious they did not mention how Zeus father devoured him because a prophecy... And talking about prophecies, wonder what could they think of Macbeth
9/1/2023 c51 19BlueWater5
I'm impressed by how you can expand upon a short myth to create such a wonderful one-shot!
19BlueWater5I'm impressed by how you can expand upon a short myth to create such a wonderful one-shot!
4/28/2023 c2 Clinio
Oh, God.
The paragraph of Harry invoking the heavens and the feminist speech is a work of art.
And the rest of the chapter, a delight.
Oh, God.
The paragraph of Harry invoking the heavens and the feminist speech is a work of art.
And the rest of the chapter, a delight.