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6/10 c6 6deets1
*disdained

This was cute. A great set-up to Violet and Jess's story. I like it. :)
6/10 c3 deets1
Ooohhh man.

Rereading this because I saw the update and I can't resist me some Synlet. I love the inevitable rise of Syndrome in Buddy as he misses his anchor to the light~

Oh, and the end? Lovely. I love it lol. It's so... cute is 100% *not* the right word. But the caring, even if it's enmeshed with some scary scary evil coming up times... I appreciate it.
4/9/2011 c4 helikesitheymikey
Vi, the reason that you like fighting against Buddy so much is because most of it is sexual tension. *snickers*

*tries to cool off* very good make out scene.

can hardly wait to see Mr. Incredibles' reaction to learning his daughter and his nemesis are lovers.

have the NSA let any other supers know that Buddy was released/reformed?

anyway PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

and can hardly wait for Tuesday to get the Incredibles blu ray combo pack!

hopefully with its release there will be more synlet fanfics
4/9/2011 c3 helikesitheymikey
oh dear...someone's gonna GET IT!

aww...LOVE Buddy being possessive/protective of Vi!
4/1/2011 c3 dreamgrl95
this was really really good im surprised its your first fanfic great job
1/7/2010 c1 helikesitheymikey
I like this story and I'm impressed that it's your first english fic.

the only thing that stuck out at me was this part

"The read head beside her was listening..."

for the color of Buddy's hair it should be "red" not "read" but other then that I don't think I noticed anything else.

I hope you'll continue with Synlet fics because there doesn't seem to be alot out there and I LOVE Synlet!

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