for The Martial Artist, the Gunblader and the Beast1/6/2014 c1 thedoodiemaster
I love this story so much. Please update it soon! It was getting really good!
I love this story so much. Please update it soon! It was getting really good!
9/26/2010 c4 fuuma82
I like your story and I just hope you don't have any attention to abandon your story. Can't wait to read next chapter.
I like your story and I just hope you don't have any attention to abandon your story. Can't wait to read next chapter.
6/21/2010 c4 
4FablerPhoenix
Hm. Not bad. I like the images this gives me when I read it, though the plot can be weird. Like the birthday party. I'm interested to see where you'll go and hope you make good use of the emotional baggage this incident would bring about on Seifer and Zell.
By the way, I... just have to tell you how disturbing I find your pen name. O_o Babies and man sex don't mix well.
4FablerPhoenixHm. Not bad. I like the images this gives me when I read it, though the plot can be weird. Like the birthday party. I'm interested to see where you'll go and hope you make good use of the emotional baggage this incident would bring about on Seifer and Zell.
By the way, I... just have to tell you how disturbing I find your pen name. O_o Babies and man sex don't mix well.
6/17/2010 c4 26BubblyScientist
Me again~!
I'm glad I made you smile... like this update made me smile! (That sounds wrong seeing how what happened in this chapter but... oh well~!)
You portray the couple just great...that and I see a very naked Seifer running down the halls in terror. XD
It's okay that you haven't updated in awhile, most good writers do. XD But... not too long cause I wanna see what the do next~! ^^
Keep up the good work~!
26BubblyScientistMe again~!
I'm glad I made you smile... like this update made me smile! (That sounds wrong seeing how what happened in this chapter but... oh well~!)
You portray the couple just great...that and I see a very naked Seifer running down the halls in terror. XD
It's okay that you haven't updated in awhile, most good writers do. XD But... not too long cause I wanna see what the do next~! ^^
Keep up the good work~!
6/17/2010 c4 SarahXxUnlovedxX
Poor Seifer and Zell Dx Hmm, I imagine things are gonna be a bit awkward between them now. I'm thinking they'll try to avoid each other, or Seifer's gonna try to make it up to Zell. It's probably more likely the first one though.
It's okay that you didn't update in awhile xP but you should totally update again soon, cuz I definatly wanna know what's gonna happen next!
I love this story :D
Poor Seifer and Zell Dx Hmm, I imagine things are gonna be a bit awkward between them now. I'm thinking they'll try to avoid each other, or Seifer's gonna try to make it up to Zell. It's probably more likely the first one though.
It's okay that you didn't update in awhile xP but you should totally update again soon, cuz I definatly wanna know what's gonna happen next!
I love this story :D
6/15/2010 c3 BubblyScientist
Okay... not gonna lie here. This has got to be the best story I've read in awhile.
I love it. Makes my tummy all full and satisfied. ^^
Please, do continue~! I've read this like five times and I'm just itching to see what happens next!
^^
Okay... not gonna lie here. This has got to be the best story I've read in awhile.
I love it. Makes my tummy all full and satisfied. ^^
Please, do continue~! I've read this like five times and I'm just itching to see what happens next!
^^
4/15/2010 c3 SarahXxUnlovedxX
This is really good :3 I really like the plot, and Seifer x Zell automatically makes it awesome
This is really good :3 I really like the plot, and Seifer x Zell automatically makes it awesome
2/21/2010 c3 5NocturnalSea
I recently fell in love with this pair X3 but there isn't many stories about them T_T I'm glad to see you got a good story going though!:D
5NocturnalSeaI recently fell in love with this pair X3 but there isn't many stories about them T_T I'm glad to see you got a good story going though!:D
1/18/2010 c2 heavenscloud666
i love your story so far. kinda gets you interested i wonder whats goin to happen. :P
i love your story so far. kinda gets you interested i wonder whats goin to happen. :P
1/9/2010 c1 AkumuOokami
This is really good, so I can't wait to find out what your writing is like when you're not "rusty"! I love these characters and I think you portrayed them well.
This is really good, so I can't wait to find out what your writing is like when you're not "rusty"! I love these characters and I think you portrayed them well.