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6/28/2010 c1 6MEleeSmasher
To all my faithful readers:

I have listened to all your comments, and I am proud to say that I am not finished, I am already making chapter 5 and will be out in a month or 2, sorry, but I have school to deal with.

And no, I am not leaving it undone.
4/30/2010 c3 10Spartan Alpha
Dude this fic is wicked man :) you've got me coming for more here man
really impresses here, I hope you get back to this. Shame to see work this
good left undone here : D

Alpha
2/10/2010 c3 32GuesssWho
Do all his weapons count as one power?
1/18/2010 c1 ryanisnum1
Use MOre Flashy words lance, Use "", And I'd really like to see something thats focused on one particular story No crossovers.

But it's FFING AWESOME DUDE!
1/17/2010 c3 sixth seraph
hm, good chapter, but in my opinion Alex is turning into too much of a mary sue.

anyway, im looking forward to new chapters
1/17/2010 c3 Deanimated
Awesome. You need t work on chapter length and depth though.
1/17/2010 c2 Randeri
Cool story, can't wait to read more of it.
1/14/2010 c2 1max2000383
I like it, but grudgingly. Don't ask me why, it's enjoyable so far, but it could be better somehow, but I have no idea how it could.

Keep it up!
1/12/2010 c2 1Bondo sheetmetal
Alex most likely would use the whip fist power to mow down the robots by shattering their knees. Either that or he could dice them like potato or something with blade or claw powers.

I like this story.
1/11/2010 c1 sixth seraph
MOAR!
1/11/2010 c1 1max2000383
Read it, liked it :P.
1/10/2010 c1 Deanimated
FInally! A character who can kick the entire FLock's asses. Please have Alex put them in their places. Especially Angel.
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