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7/11/2021 c1 1Inperiosus
parody bad grammar

not sure why people think that's okay
6/5/2019 c1 donovandelaney26101
That was hard to understand.
1/2/2017 c2 Guest
This is stupid and what is cover like a bukkake anyway
Like wtf
8/22/2016 c1 CadmeanPanther
Is everyone in the reviews retarded ? It literally says Parody and Humor as the genre. Seriously all this shows is that people can't read for shit. Anyway mate keep on writing funniest shit ever my mum shouted at me( because I am literally reading this in the middle of the night) to keep it down. Keep on writing I can tell comedy is your forte.
12/14/2015 c1 Guest
Poor Grammer
3/20/2015 c3 Guest
Lacking in vivid and good sex scenes
9/2/2014 c1 Lush Lavish
This is possibly the best story ever or the worst story of all time. I don't know. Do you know why I don't know? The grammar is so pathetically pathetic I have no idea what's happening!
7/8/2014 c1 4Jiraiya's lost novel
3 words. What. The. And Fuck. Like seriously learn grammar. Or at least learn how to make a full sentence without it sounding it just went through a shredder. Seriously so many words are missing. If you went back and fixed it it wouldn't be so bad.
9/28/2011 c1 Guest
Think u could make a kid goku and kid chichi sex fic? That would be soo awesome.You did really good job with the sex parts in here.This was a great fic but it had a few spelling errors
11/23/2010 c1 calvinjons
holy shit dude learn how to fucking spell and my god this SUCKS!

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