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17DragonGirl323
This was just too cute! I love dem Tantalus boiz as well! Just picturing them as little boys makes me smile. I'm actually hoping you add more to this. It's just too cute for words! :]
Sincerely,
DragonGirl323
17DragonGirl323This was just too cute! I love dem Tantalus boiz as well! Just picturing them as little boys makes me smile. I'm actually hoping you add more to this. It's just too cute for words! :]
Sincerely,
DragonGirl323
6/16/2010 c1 1ashbazell
your grammar is so...wonderful. it makes your stories that much more enjoyable to read ! i hate happening upon a story with bad grammar and no flow. but yours are just the opposite. :) my new fav.
1ashbazellyour grammar is so...wonderful. it makes your stories that much more enjoyable to read ! i hate happening upon a story with bad grammar and no flow. but yours are just the opposite. :) my new fav.
2/15/2010 c1 Aerithnes
This story was..Interesting..Yes it was great
This story was..Interesting..Yes it was great
1/12/2010 c1 16Myshu
Gwahah, man oh man, I almost couldn't read past the first few lines because I knew what was coming was going to HURT. But that macho banter is perfect-exactly what a bored group of hoodlums would sound like.
This was funtastic altogether, miss. Your style took on a very crisp, droll tone that worked really well here. Loved the line about 'undressed civilians.'
Rah rah Tantalus! Bros for life. It's great to see more stuff for 'em, especially from you! Keep up the coolness.
16MyshuGwahah, man oh man, I almost couldn't read past the first few lines because I knew what was coming was going to HURT. But that macho banter is perfect-exactly what a bored group of hoodlums would sound like.
This was funtastic altogether, miss. Your style took on a very crisp, droll tone that worked really well here. Loved the line about 'undressed civilians.'
Rah rah Tantalus! Bros for life. It's great to see more stuff for 'em, especially from you! Keep up the coolness.
1/11/2010 c1 10colorfulCheshire
Aw! You're just getting more addicted to the Tantalus gang than before.
I think the last line had the most impact on me. It just makes you smile.
10colorfulCheshireAw! You're just getting more addicted to the Tantalus gang than before.
I think the last line had the most impact on me. It just makes you smile.
1/10/2010 c1 14Caitlyn-4479
I really loved this fic. Aside from the fact I love all of your fics of course ^^ And I can't resist a story about the Tantalus boys :D
I gotta tell you, I've been having a lousy week after I got my wisdom teeth out, but this really put a smile on my face (Well, as big a smile you can with puffy bruised cheeks xD) and brightened my week. Plus I haven't read something from you in a while!
The whole story fun to read :) You have this type of addictive writing style that makes it hard to tear yourself away from the page. My favourite one I have to say was swimming lessons, purely for the image of a young Zidane and Blank running back to the hideout with no clothes on xD
The part at the end just goes to prove those brothers always have each others backs. That's the beauty of Tantalus and I really enjoyed reading this :D
Loved it 3 Also can't wait for the next chappie of Foundations! ^^
14Caitlyn-4479I really loved this fic. Aside from the fact I love all of your fics of course ^^ And I can't resist a story about the Tantalus boys :D
I gotta tell you, I've been having a lousy week after I got my wisdom teeth out, but this really put a smile on my face (Well, as big a smile you can with puffy bruised cheeks xD) and brightened my week. Plus I haven't read something from you in a while!
The whole story fun to read :) You have this type of addictive writing style that makes it hard to tear yourself away from the page. My favourite one I have to say was swimming lessons, purely for the image of a young Zidane and Blank running back to the hideout with no clothes on xD
The part at the end just goes to prove those brothers always have each others backs. That's the beauty of Tantalus and I really enjoyed reading this :D
Loved it 3 Also can't wait for the next chappie of Foundations! ^^
1/9/2010 c1 19sup3rl0z3r
I love me some Tantalus fics. I really enjoyed this. My favorite art was when Baku found out about zidane's lack of swimming skill. I could just imagine Zidane standing there, wide blue eyes shining bright against the shady interior of the hideout looking all cute and what not. Made me think of Driftwood (sigh) I think I'm gonna trot over to that fic and re-read some of my favorite chapters now.
19sup3rl0z3rI love me some Tantalus fics. I really enjoyed this. My favorite art was when Baku found out about zidane's lack of swimming skill. I could just imagine Zidane standing there, wide blue eyes shining bright against the shady interior of the hideout looking all cute and what not. Made me think of Driftwood (sigh) I think I'm gonna trot over to that fic and re-read some of my favorite chapters now.
1/9/2010 c1 Twitch13014
Well done, well done indeed. Nothing like death defying dares, conquering fears and getting some payback to bring a family closer. I thought you did well changing Zidane's dialog to make him sound younger. I think the reason why I liked this one is because I can relate to it a bit. I have a brother of my own and we have dared each other to do stupid stuff in the past as well as getting revenge for one another. Zidane learning to swim takes me back to when I had to learn, I wasnt overly excited to learn either but in the end I had little choice. This was a great fic on Tantalus, job well done.
Well done, well done indeed. Nothing like death defying dares, conquering fears and getting some payback to bring a family closer. I thought you did well changing Zidane's dialog to make him sound younger. I think the reason why I liked this one is because I can relate to it a bit. I have a brother of my own and we have dared each other to do stupid stuff in the past as well as getting revenge for one another. Zidane learning to swim takes me back to when I had to learn, I wasnt overly excited to learn either but in the end I had little choice. This was a great fic on Tantalus, job well done.