for The perfect date1/16/2010 c7 VENZwife
Awe! YEAH! This really was the perfect date! I am so glad they admitted their feelings for each other! This is beautiful!
I think you should definitely have them wake up in the same bed, and not the guest room. If she was planning on staying in the guest room, he could have dropped her off at home then given her a spectacular goodbye kiss at her door. Since she went home with him, that leads me to think that they really weren't ready to part ways that evening, and wanted to stay close to one another.
She said she wanted to take it slow, and I think that is wonderful. Just because they slept in the same bed, doesn't mean to they have have had sex yet. If I were them, I would have just wanted to have some wonderful making out and falling asleep in each other's arms.
Awe! YEAH! This really was the perfect date! I am so glad they admitted their feelings for each other! This is beautiful!
I think you should definitely have them wake up in the same bed, and not the guest room. If she was planning on staying in the guest room, he could have dropped her off at home then given her a spectacular goodbye kiss at her door. Since she went home with him, that leads me to think that they really weren't ready to part ways that evening, and wanted to stay close to one another.
She said she wanted to take it slow, and I think that is wonderful. Just because they slept in the same bed, doesn't mean to they have have had sex yet. If I were them, I would have just wanted to have some wonderful making out and falling asleep in each other's arms.
1/16/2010 c7 AndrannaBlades
OK same bed or different bed..hmm i think same bed is good though they did just get together, i stick with same bed..reason being it will make Angela squeal if she finds out and two booth may or maynot get embarrassed in the morning. Also did you know that the word petrol is acually the origanal name for gas that we created accidently by refining oil.
OK same bed or different bed..hmm i think same bed is good though they did just get together, i stick with same bed..reason being it will make Angela squeal if she finds out and two booth may or maynot get embarrassed in the morning. Also did you know that the word petrol is acually the origanal name for gas that we created accidently by refining oil.
1/16/2010 c7 jsiebert
Good story liked the plot. I think with Bones wanting to take it slow they could awake in the same bed but not have had sex yet. They have slept in the same bed while on cases before.
Please consider writing a sequel
FYI in American English petrol is gasoline. Common phrase is that the car has run out of gas.
Also boot of car I don't know what that is in English.
Perhaps using a British and American English dictionary would help.
Good story liked the plot. I think with Bones wanting to take it slow they could awake in the same bed but not have had sex yet. They have slept in the same bed while on cases before.
Please consider writing a sequel
FYI in American English petrol is gasoline. Common phrase is that the car has run out of gas.
Also boot of car I don't know what that is in English.
Perhaps using a British and American English dictionary would help.
1/16/2010 c7 
9Lotte-Bubbles
very very good love it. OMG i didnt know you were and AUZZIE! yay we shall rule fanfiction...slowly...:P love it lots and lots and lots
9Lotte-Bubblesvery very good love it. OMG i didnt know you were and AUZZIE! yay we shall rule fanfiction...slowly...:P love it lots and lots and lots
1/15/2010 c6 BB
At first I didn't know what petrol was, but now I do lol. Great chapter. I can't wait to read on! :)
At first I didn't know what petrol was, but now I do lol. Great chapter. I can't wait to read on! :)
1/15/2010 c6 jacklynvt11
That was a really sweet chapter. Loved the kiss. It was done very well. I liked the line where Booth said this place could be theirs. Thought that was nice. I would have liked maybe a description of where they were or what they were looking to add more detail to it and be able to picture where they were. But otherwise it was great. Awesome job. :)
That was a really sweet chapter. Loved the kiss. It was done very well. I liked the line where Booth said this place could be theirs. Thought that was nice. I would have liked maybe a description of where they were or what they were looking to add more detail to it and be able to picture where they were. But otherwise it was great. Awesome job. :)
1/15/2010 c6 1BlueTigress
great chapter!
Yeahhy now they kissed! :D
and now they're out of petrol? lmao
Fantastic! :D Can't wait to find out how they're going to manage this situation! lol
1BlueTigressgreat chapter!
Yeahhy now they kissed! :D
and now they're out of petrol? lmao
Fantastic! :D Can't wait to find out how they're going to manage this situation! lol
1/15/2010 c6 VENZwife
Oh no! LOL! No gas! I don't know about you, but every perfect date I've ever had had at least one staffu - and running out of gas is a great one! LOL! ;-)
Loved the first kiss! It was perfect!
Oh no! LOL! No gas! I don't know about you, but every perfect date I've ever had had at least one staffu - and running out of gas is a great one! LOL! ;-)
Loved the first kiss! It was perfect!
1/15/2010 c6 asdljhadlsfkjhasdf
WONDERWALL! OH MY GOD I LOVE THAT SONG!
Thats spooky - I've used an Oasis song in the chapter I've just posted today - great minds honey. I'm from the same city as them!
Amazing chapter, and the kiss was perfect!
WONDERWALL! OH MY GOD I LOVE THAT SONG!
Thats spooky - I've used an Oasis song in the chapter I've just posted today - great minds honey. I'm from the same city as them!
Amazing chapter, and the kiss was perfect!
1/15/2010 c6 9Lotte-Bubbles
hehe lol thats funny...
well i jsut kissed my best friend i got get away...bugger no fuel...um love it update again soon its awesome
9Lotte-Bubbleshehe lol thats funny...
well i jsut kissed my best friend i got get away...bugger no fuel...um love it update again soon its awesome
1/15/2010 c6 11littlejunebug
:D ohh this is getting even more interesting. i like the turn & the kiss was very sweet in my opinion:) hope u update again soon!
11littlejunebug:D ohh this is getting even more interesting. i like the turn & the kiss was very sweet in my opinion:) hope u update again soon!