
4/22/2016 c2 Guest
This a great fanfiction! I've only read oneshots or very short stories of yamamoto x gokudera so this is nice. Also I'm just gonna guess that VTRHM stands for Vongola Tenth Right Hand Man.
This a great fanfiction! I've only read oneshots or very short stories of yamamoto x gokudera so this is nice. Also I'm just gonna guess that VTRHM stands for Vongola Tenth Right Hand Man.
1/2/2014 c21 Bs173
WOW! I'm finishing this finally and god, this was one of the MOST fics I've ever LOVED! I really enjoyed reading every single chapter of it.. the idea was really ADORABLE and my eagerness for how they would know that their secret friend were actually each other was increasing with every chapter and event x33! and you didn't disappoint me! I really loved the way you made it that Takeshi covered Hayato's eyes to let the other talk honestly before he knew who the other was.. really sweeeeeeeeeet! and the add of D18 was nice too! I really ADORE this fic! .. and the epilogue XD! I wonder how they had the twins! did Goku got pregnant or something XDDD? Anyway, you are really a great author :D! hope you write more about this wonderful pairing *hearts*
WOW! I'm finishing this finally and god, this was one of the MOST fics I've ever LOVED! I really enjoyed reading every single chapter of it.. the idea was really ADORABLE and my eagerness for how they would know that their secret friend were actually each other was increasing with every chapter and event x33! and you didn't disappoint me! I really loved the way you made it that Takeshi covered Hayato's eyes to let the other talk honestly before he knew who the other was.. really sweeeeeeeeeet! and the add of D18 was nice too! I really ADORE this fic! .. and the epilogue XD! I wonder how they had the twins! did Goku got pregnant or something XDDD? Anyway, you are really a great author :D! hope you write more about this wonderful pairing *hearts*
12/15/2013 c21
25DarkIceAngelFlare
I can't believe I managed to finish this thing. It's cute, no doubt, but your writing style has a long way to go. Focus on your direct speech and descriptions more (as well as avoiding cliches) if you seriously want to be a writer. Thanks for writing for this pairing and I hope you continue to do so, with improvements in the future

I can't believe I managed to finish this thing. It's cute, no doubt, but your writing style has a long way to go. Focus on your direct speech and descriptions more (as well as avoiding cliches) if you seriously want to be a writer. Thanks for writing for this pairing and I hope you continue to do so, with improvements in the future
5/20/2013 c21 Rawranfe
O_o I READ YOUR WHOLE FANFIC IN 3 HOURS AND IT IS AWESOME O.O Btw how did they get the kids? m-preg?
O_o I READ YOUR WHOLE FANFIC IN 3 HOURS AND IT IS AWESOME O.O Btw how did they get the kids? m-preg?
5/20/2013 c3 Rawranfe
Omg i love your fanfic i've read the first 3 chapters at light speed o.o
Omg i love your fanfic i've read the first 3 chapters at light speed o.o
5/7/2013 c21
4Pineapple Fairy Queen
TELL MEH HOW! D:
...
I loved this ._.
WHY DID IT END!?
WHY DO I PRESS ENDTE EVERY SCENTENCE!?
Nobody knows..
Not even you.
Net even me.
Why am I doing this?
Dunno either.
Does it matter?
It'll make my review seem longer :D
So...
TELL ME HOW THEY DID IT!
And you may take 'did it' in a different way
Kufufufufu
I just scared myself...
Anywaaaay..
Bye!

TELL MEH HOW! D:
...
I loved this ._.
WHY DID IT END!?
WHY DO I PRESS ENDTE EVERY SCENTENCE!?
Nobody knows..
Not even you.
Net even me.
Why am I doing this?
Dunno either.
Does it matter?
It'll make my review seem longer :D
So...
TELL ME HOW THEY DID IT!
And you may take 'did it' in a different way
Kufufufufu
I just scared myself...
Anywaaaay..
Bye!
1/28/2013 c21
27swanfrost
Er...their kids were adopted right...? Please tell me they were adopted.
And, lovely story! Some parts had me grinning like an idiot and some just made me go "8059!" :)

Er...their kids were adopted right...? Please tell me they were adopted.
And, lovely story! Some parts had me grinning like an idiot and some just made me go "8059!" :)
12/13/2012 c4
15wolfeclipse25
Hahahahaha! As soon as you said "Romeo and Juliet" I knew Gokudera and Yamamoto would be Romeo and Juliet!

Hahahahaha! As soon as you said "Romeo and Juliet" I knew Gokudera and Yamamoto would be Romeo and Juliet!
12/10/2012 c21 Crazy me
Awwww! That was just the sweetest thing I've ever read !
Awwww! That was just the sweetest thing I've ever read !
11/30/2012 c21 Comicers7th
How do Yamamoto and Gokudera have a children?
How do Yamamoto and Gokudera have a children?
11/23/2012 c21
26Fi Suki Saki
.GOD!
I never thought that I WILL or ALREADY FOUND a GREAT fic like THIS ONE! SO COOL! AWESOME, INCREADIBLE, ADORBLE, GREAT, CUTE, SWEET, AMAZING, THE BEST!
I LOVE IT! Uke uke became bestfriend too is Awesome! MY OTP!
I Love It!
The scene of RomeoxJuliet is The Most Epic ever! But when Kyoya being nice, is the Epic Great ever! And Tsuna not that dense! XDD
Though actually I want Hayato to call Kyoko with "Kyoko" in front of Tsuna before Tsuna confess to Kyoko so maybe Takeshi can a bit jealous?! If Tsuna, I confiden he will not jealous.
Let me fave this, please! x3

.GOD!
I never thought that I WILL or ALREADY FOUND a GREAT fic like THIS ONE! SO COOL! AWESOME, INCREADIBLE, ADORBLE, GREAT, CUTE, SWEET, AMAZING, THE BEST!
I LOVE IT! Uke uke became bestfriend too is Awesome! MY OTP!
I Love It!
The scene of RomeoxJuliet is The Most Epic ever! But when Kyoya being nice, is the Epic Great ever! And Tsuna not that dense! XDD
Though actually I want Hayato to call Kyoko with "Kyoko" in front of Tsuna before Tsuna confess to Kyoko so maybe Takeshi can a bit jealous?! If Tsuna, I confiden he will not jealous.
Let me fave this, please! x3