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2/21/2010 c7 17rholou
i really like how much depth you go into and i love a bit of healing time, great chapter
2/21/2010 c7 Jessjess494
I'm really glad the story isn't finished yet as I love the way you've depicted all three of the Winchesters in this and I don't want it to come to an end! Thank you for sharing this awsome story!
2/21/2010 c7 sosori
really great chapter, my favourite part is when Dean wake up for the first time because something is wrong with him, very well written.

to bad John don't let Sam know about his brother

he's gonna be angry with his dad when he'll know (hope so)

I'm still enjoying your story so keep going, can't wait for more
2/20/2010 c7 4alwaysateen
Too bad John decided to erase Sam's messages... But I'm sure Dean will know his brother called while he was out, I mean he knows he ask the paramedics to call him...

Good to see Sam still care and he's worried about his brother. Maybe the next time he'll call, Dean can finally answer him...
2/20/2010 c7 ukfan101
oh evil John, I knew that he was going to erase those messages from Sam but it still is so horrible that he did it. Once again Dean gets the short end of the stick. great updates to the story...
2/20/2010 c7 Noninone
Ah John *shakes head* I'l just keep my mouth shut this time.

Well, I like details. So great job.

Dean's coming oout next chapter? awesome.

So til next!
2/20/2010 c7 AllieMcD
I really enjoyed this! I love John trying and I hope Sam doesn't give up trying to get in touch with Dean. Poor hurt Dean, I love that he's such a fighter that he's actually making it worse in this case when he's suppose to rest but can't
2/20/2010 c7 moira4eku
I'm loving the hospital scenes! Sometimes the best part of a story is the sick/healing part. I love the comfort scenes best. Poor Dean, he seems so fragile here. I just want to give him a hug and the same time kick John's butt. What was he thinking deleting all of Sam's calls and messages. That will hurt Dean more if he thinks Sam has been avoiding him. I can't wait to read the next part!
2/20/2010 c7 cecne
I really enjoyed this chapter. I love all the detail you put into the story. Can't wait for more!
2/20/2010 c7 143PADavis
Loved the chapter - I love the hurt AND the comfort, gosh darn it. And I did like Dean needed Sam so much and the comparison with Sam and Dad's care was very striking. Sam knowing just what Dean needed. I also appreciated John deleting Sam's voice mails.

Phoebe
2/20/2010 c6 moira4eku
I'm still thoroughly enjoying this story! I'm glad that Dean seems to have come through with his surgery somewhat ok. He still seems like he is in a precarious situation. I'm really not happy with how John treated Sam. Sam has the right to know what happened to his brother. What is John thinking. I just wanted to slap him for out right lying to him about something so crucial. Sam will go ballistic if he finds out. Dean will probably want Sam with him. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
2/20/2010 c7 111deangirl1
Well, I hope I balance out the "disappointed" readers - because I would have been really, really disappointed NOT to have gotten this part of the story! I really like the detail you provide and hope you never change that. There seems to be lots of hurt!Dean yet to come - seems like John is intent on hustling Dean out of the hospital before he's really ready... and JOHN! Deleting Sammy's message! That's just wrong! Poor boys! Looking forward to more...
2/20/2010 c7 masondixon
Definitely do not want you to rush through this story. I appreciate the detail and the depth you have put in each chapter. Absolutely no rushing please! Frustrating when John deleted Sam's message! I wanted to punch him in the face! Dean needs Sam and Sam would come if he knew Dean was hurt. I still hope he does come to Dean in this story. Thank You and I look forward to chapter 8.
2/20/2010 c7 396Amberdreams
Hya, it's your story, you write it how you feel it wants/needs to be written! You could have ended it with the rescue, but obviously had something else to say, so that's fine. I am wondering where you will go next but I'm happy to read it as if it were a sequel and see what happens...

Like the picture of John struggling with his emotional hang-ups and inability to express his love and concern. Only one small critisism - I felt there was a bit of repetition that could have been edited out to make this a slightly shorter, tighter chapter.
2/20/2010 c6 Jessjess494
I just finished this chapter and this story has got me so hooked! Loved the detail in the hospital scene and you really captured Sam and John in that phone call. This story just keeps getting better and better. Can't wait for the next installment!
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