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9/28/2014 c10 Qzh
Not gonna lie i skipped those flashbacks lol, the story is interesting enough without little flashback breaks.
10/12/2012 c15 mattcun
plz write more
7/9/2012 c8 4Dragonskyt
Ya know, I could actually believe Kenpachi being related to Anko. It really does make sense if you think outside the box.
11/21/2011 c16 8Noctus Of The Thousand Blades
WHY DID YOU STOP? seriously, over a year with out a new chapter? come on dude have a heart. your fic was really starting to take off. so PLEASE for the love of all that is fanfiction. please update.
11/21/2011 c2 shadowfang jutsu
the story is great so far just plz stop bashing aang he is one of my favorite characters azula too i just think she needs true good in her life and she would be a good guy i feel sorry she was corruption by her father's evil
11/21/2011 c1 shadowfang jutsu
this is so cool a very original view i hope that you keep right
5/29/2011 c16 god of all
Great story so far pleases continue this story soon.
3/16/2011 c2 Tirion Fordring
Good lord I pray you don't make Naruto shave his head...

That would just be weird, Air bending traditions be DAMNED!
2/22/2011 c1 30Manga154
wow! you know what? kids allways mess things up
11/21/2010 c1 naruchan84
good story
10/13/2010 c1 Hachichiyyin
It's okay. Though you should get beta'd. (Many typos and grammars) And it's pretty confusing at first.
6/29/2010 c8 Z-Breezy
Kenpachi crazy yo
5/25/2010 c15 9Read my stuff 007
awsome
5/25/2010 c15 1geetac
I like the chapter.
5/23/2010 c15 35shadowwriter329
Man I just read this today and I can't get enough. as for sugestion to make this better, I guess you could have his parents come back to the leaf for Naruto and/or have the fifth Mizukage make an arrang to merry him. other then that I got nothing.
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