for Love Is All That Matters4/16/2010 c1 
24ObsessedwReading
Amazing! Doyle and Cordelia forever! Did you know that Joss was going to bring Doyle back before the actor(Glenn Quinn) died in real life.
24ObsessedwReadingAmazing! Doyle and Cordelia forever! Did you know that Joss was going to bring Doyle back before the actor(Glenn Quinn) died in real life.
1/22/2010 c1 deddybear
Omg that made me cry!
I have only seen the first season up to "hero" then I can't bear to watch the rest. Doyle was hilarious and I would have loved to see how their relationship played out.
Awesome chapter!
Omg that made me cry!
I have only seen the first season up to "hero" then I can't bear to watch the rest. Doyle was hilarious and I would have loved to see how their relationship played out.
Awesome chapter!
1/19/2010 c1 158shopgirl152
Aw. A cute, fluffy Cordy/Doyle fic. Thank you! That was highly enjoyable.
158shopgirl152Aw. A cute, fluffy Cordy/Doyle fic. Thank you! That was highly enjoyable.
1/14/2010 c1 4batgirl2992
It was a cute story. i don't know if its just that i haven't watched season one for a while, but Doyle kinda sounded like spike...
but good idea
4batgirl2992It was a cute story. i don't know if its just that i haven't watched season one for a while, but Doyle kinda sounded like spike...
but good idea
1/14/2010 c1 8fireandrain5478
I think you should be more careful with sentence structure and reiteration of the ideas in some of these sentences. The idea is great, but when one of the Powers says "You saved a boat full of demons, a vampire, and a human with your sacrifice" and then the next line or to down says "you risked your life to save her", that's a reiteration of the same idea. I think you should either remove the "with your sacrifice" in the first line or you should delete the second line something in the format of a question like, "did you do it for her" in which case you would need to delete both lines or something like "we cannot pretend to understand your pain" or something. But it is a great idea. Good effort!
8fireandrain5478I think you should be more careful with sentence structure and reiteration of the ideas in some of these sentences. The idea is great, but when one of the Powers says "You saved a boat full of demons, a vampire, and a human with your sacrifice" and then the next line or to down says "you risked your life to save her", that's a reiteration of the same idea. I think you should either remove the "with your sacrifice" in the first line or you should delete the second line something in the format of a question like, "did you do it for her" in which case you would need to delete both lines or something like "we cannot pretend to understand your pain" or something. But it is a great idea. Good effort!
1/10/2010 c1 Nightwatcher'sunknowngirl
DoyleXCordy forever! LD
DoyleXCordy forever! LD