
12/29/2013 c1
3bookwormergirl
I really liked it, it was really well written. The only thing is that James has the hazel eyes, Lily the green, and that the second kiss is dated in July, and, well, school is out in July.

I really liked it, it was really well written. The only thing is that James has the hazel eyes, Lily the green, and that the second kiss is dated in July, and, well, school is out in July.
6/27/2012 c9 TechNomaNcer28
Awwh!The feelings in there!And the reactions,the thinking!So amazing,seriously!I loved the depth of everything in there!
Awwh!The feelings in there!And the reactions,the thinking!So amazing,seriously!I loved the depth of everything in there!
6/26/2012 c1 TechNomaNcer28
Awwwh!WOW!I loved the tone of this,the slightly kiddish sentences still in their fourth year,the way they react to everything around,really!Loved it all!And your use of words and expressions,ammmazing!
Awwwh!WOW!I loved the tone of this,the slightly kiddish sentences still in their fourth year,the way they react to everything around,really!Loved it all!And your use of words and expressions,ammmazing!
2/4/2012 c5
2MoonyistheBestMarauder
Good job! I just started reading this story, and I'm really glad I decided to read it! It's great! I love Lily, she's awesome. I can't wait to continue reading! I'll try to keep reviewing, but sometimes I read too fast and get carried away... *sheepish smile*
~Moony

Good job! I just started reading this story, and I'm really glad I decided to read it! It's great! I love Lily, she's awesome. I can't wait to continue reading! I'll try to keep reviewing, but sometimes I read too fast and get carried away... *sheepish smile*
~Moony
4/27/2011 c5 NinaStarRemus
You know, I swear that Lily has green eyes and James has hazel. But, other than that, I love your story so far. I can't think of anything else to say, so, uh...:3
You know, I swear that Lily has green eyes and James has hazel. But, other than that, I love your story so far. I can't think of anything else to say, so, uh...:3
2/8/2011 c21
2Geo Nova
I liked the story, DISPISED how flippantly James used the memory charm on them, and how you played it off as a joke. I would certainly not forgive my friends very quickly if they wiped my memory.

I liked the story, DISPISED how flippantly James used the memory charm on them, and how you played it off as a joke. I would certainly not forgive my friends very quickly if they wiped my memory.
10/9/2010 c2
2Ashenglow
Normally I'm not a big fan of reviewing, but I just had to mention that you using an Emilie Autumn quote to head your chapter totally made my day. :) Also, I'm really enjoying what I've read of this story so far, so thank you.
:D
Ashe

Normally I'm not a big fan of reviewing, but I just had to mention that you using an Emilie Autumn quote to head your chapter totally made my day. :) Also, I'm really enjoying what I've read of this story so far, so thank you.
:D
Ashe
7/9/2010 c16
44a walk on the w i l d side
Oh Oh Oh!
*While munching on cookie*
Poor Remus, evil Sirius.
CKC

Oh Oh Oh!
*While munching on cookie*
Poor Remus, evil Sirius.
CKC
7/9/2010 c21 a walk on the w i l d side
OH YAY!
That's pretty much all I can say.
The incredibly happy CKC
OH YAY!
That's pretty much all I can say.
The incredibly happy CKC
7/9/2010 c20 a walk on the w i l d side
Oh YAY! Awesome story! Love it!
That was amazing, and cool, and interesting, and unexpected, and just amazingly REAL.
Thanks SO much for that,
CKC
Oh YAY! Awesome story! Love it!
That was amazing, and cool, and interesting, and unexpected, and just amazingly REAL.
Thanks SO much for that,
CKC