
8/9/2010 c1
7underthedarkness
My eyes litterally hurt from how cute that was. If you heard my scream then you probaby get the point. AAAAWWWWWEEEEEE! X3 *hugs you and hands around pocky*
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~Underthedarkness

My eyes litterally hurt from how cute that was. If you heard my scream then you probaby get the point. AAAAWWWWWEEEEEE! X3 *hugs you and hands around pocky*
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~Underthedarkness
6/11/2010 c1
26Moyashi.beansprout
Gaarin: It's good! You should maybe have warnings for Lavilee and OOCness, ne?

Gaarin: It's good! You should maybe have warnings for Lavilee and OOCness, ne?
1/21/2010 c1
3wolfpup026
OMG I really love this! I'm not a huge Yullen fan, but the way you wrote it actually made me like this pairing. The story was so sweet; I love the whole thing about the roses. And you're a great writer too, you have Kadna and Allen perfectly in character. I think you should definitely write more soon!

OMG I really love this! I'm not a huge Yullen fan, but the way you wrote it actually made me like this pairing. The story was so sweet; I love the whole thing about the roses. And you're a great writer too, you have Kadna and Allen perfectly in character. I think you should definitely write more soon!
1/13/2010 c1
3TheConspiracyTheory
Aw... yeah it was a pile of mush~~ Nice storyline though you really need to get the punctuation edited. As for a first story, good job~~

Aw... yeah it was a pile of mush~~ Nice storyline though you really need to get the punctuation edited. As for a first story, good job~~
1/13/2010 c1
105waterlit
hahaha so you published your first fic! heh actually, no offence meant but i think you could improve the paragraphing and the grammer here, since the flow of the story was interrupted at times by such stylistic errors (or maybe it's just me ahaha). but there were nice descriptive phrases! and well yeahh the plastic rose part was sweet. wouldn't have thought kanda could be so romantic xD

hahaha so you published your first fic! heh actually, no offence meant but i think you could improve the paragraphing and the grammer here, since the flow of the story was interrupted at times by such stylistic errors (or maybe it's just me ahaha). but there were nice descriptive phrases! and well yeahh the plastic rose part was sweet. wouldn't have thought kanda could be so romantic xD