
4/16/2012 c4 UnknownIdol
great sad story few spelling mistakes vut overall good thought so far away would have fitted better as title imo
great sad story few spelling mistakes vut overall good thought so far away would have fitted better as title imo
4/15/2012 c1 UnknownIdol
ok enough for today =(
good stuff but too fluffy for me rite now maybe i'll dinish tomorrow anyways good band good song good story and good you for blending these parts together in a very clichy way (sorry for sarcasm )
i hope i didn't make you sad
~aKKurate - known by many names - the annoying person that makes everyone sad just to feel better himself =(
ok enough for today =(
good stuff but too fluffy for me rite now maybe i'll dinish tomorrow anyways good band good song good story and good you for blending these parts together in a very clichy way (sorry for sarcasm )
i hope i didn't make you sad
~aKKurate - known by many names - the annoying person that makes everyone sad just to feel better himself =(
9/6/2011 c4 Jp
This made me cry. I loved this fanfic.
This made me cry. I loved this fanfic.
12/21/2010 c1 MJ
This story made me cry. It touched my heart and I'm glad that you wrote about Rev. R.I.P
This story made me cry. It touched my heart and I'm glad that you wrote about Rev. R.I.P
8/24/2010 c4 A7Xloveforever666
I just wanna say that this was amazing and it reminded me of how much I miss The Rev. to me he was the best drummer in the world.
I just wanna say that this was amazing and it reminded me of how much I miss The Rev. to me he was the best drummer in the world.
2/25/2010 c3
10GWTWTNME
Dude just reading that made me cry again (not as bad as when he first died of course, but still!)
That was a good chapter, even if it was sad.
Have you been on the a7x website lately? matt got a tattoo dedicated to jimmy; the same one i'm gonna get! i was so excited, even tho i was (of course) sad at the same time.

Dude just reading that made me cry again (not as bad as when he first died of course, but still!)
That was a good chapter, even if it was sad.
Have you been on the a7x website lately? matt got a tattoo dedicated to jimmy; the same one i'm gonna get! i was so excited, even tho i was (of course) sad at the same time.
1/31/2010 c2 GWTWTNME
Hi! My name is Eliza, and I am probably one of the top 10 avenged sevenfold fans of the world, if not number one. I like your stories (I've already reviewed the other two), but you seem to be struggling a little bit with grammar/ spelling. I understand that it's not everyone's forte, but I seem to have been blessed with an higher understanding than most people, so I'd like to offer my services to become your beta.
Your stories have a lot of thought and plot behind them, but I feel like you'd get your point across more clearly if you just had someone scan through and correct a couple mistakes here and there. Please consider using me as your beta :)
Thanks so much!
P.S. You can contact me anytime at
Hi! My name is Eliza, and I am probably one of the top 10 avenged sevenfold fans of the world, if not number one. I like your stories (I've already reviewed the other two), but you seem to be struggling a little bit with grammar/ spelling. I understand that it's not everyone's forte, but I seem to have been blessed with an higher understanding than most people, so I'd like to offer my services to become your beta.
Your stories have a lot of thought and plot behind them, but I feel like you'd get your point across more clearly if you just had someone scan through and correct a couple mistakes here and there. Please consider using me as your beta :)
Thanks so much!
P.S. You can contact me anytime at