11/8/2011 c1 Cerberusx
I really want to see more of this. Please, please continue this fanfic. I really like this fic so far especially the pairings. Also wouldn't Naruto/629 be stronger then 626, 627 and 628?
I really want to see more of this. Please, please continue this fanfic. I really like this fic so far especially the pairings. Also wouldn't Naruto/629 be stronger then 626, 627 and 628?
8/7/2011 c1 ninetails42
I hope you update soon it's killing me that your not
Poll1-yes
Poll2-kyubbi (or however you spell it.)
I hope you update soon it's killing me that your not
Poll1-yes
Poll2-kyubbi (or however you spell it.)
8/6/2011 c1 8The Philosipher
I like how this one starts off. I'm interested to find out where it goes from here.
I like how this one starts off. I'm interested to find out where it goes from here.
8/6/2011 c1 FoxDemon1023
I totally think you shoud make a Naruto & Angle lemon. And I hope that you won't abandon this story.
I totally think you shoud make a Naruto & Angle lemon. And I hope that you won't abandon this story.
8/2/2011 c1 12Ninja bat master
GREAT STORY IDEA! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
for the polls-yes to the lemon and have him named kyuubi!
also...maybe have him know more about seals and jutsu than in canon?
MORE SOON PLEASE!
GREAT STORY IDEA! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
for the polls-yes to the lemon and have him named kyuubi!
also...maybe have him know more about seals and jutsu than in canon?
MORE SOON PLEASE!
5/31/2011 c1 3GameJunkie7
How DARE you! Such a CRUEL cliffhanger! ARGH! *foams at mouth*
Lilo: No more caffeine for you...
Anyway since you haven't updated this story yet I'll add to the Lemon poll: Angel.
I mean I'm not into that stuff or anything it just seems better since they're essentially the same species and would typically have natural feelings for each other (none of that "cousin" BS since they're only "technically" related since they were all made by Jumba)
Regardless I don't know if I missed it or anything but I don't know what the OC is anyway (I'm new to your stories by the way; I'll be reading the others).
Also don't beat yourself up about Jumba you've got his accent pretty well but it isn't as "jumbled" as "Jumba" really speaks so you could afford even more mistakes like quote: "This is he him speaking." along those lines is perfect so keep it up.
Although the poll for naming Naruto is over I also support the majority that she name him after a form of kitsune since he'll obviously be a fox-like alien experiment "made for to be epitome of cute and cuddly while retaining all powers of 626."
Also just to add this in: I'm personally debating whether or not you'll have Jumba give him an Advanced Speech Program like he did for 625 or have standard speech capabilities like Stitch or none at all but judging by how you had the choices being she name him instead of him telling her I'm going to supposed several things:
He forgot who he is (can't tell her)
He can't speak at all (can't tell her)
He decides to give up his previous persona (choose not to)
He's too confused (he's caught up in the situation with chaos centering on him as he rampages until they capture him)
Anyway I'm subscribing to this story to alert me for updates.
How DARE you! Such a CRUEL cliffhanger! ARGH! *foams at mouth*
Lilo: No more caffeine for you...
Anyway since you haven't updated this story yet I'll add to the Lemon poll: Angel.
I mean I'm not into that stuff or anything it just seems better since they're essentially the same species and would typically have natural feelings for each other (none of that "cousin" BS since they're only "technically" related since they were all made by Jumba)
Regardless I don't know if I missed it or anything but I don't know what the OC is anyway (I'm new to your stories by the way; I'll be reading the others).
Also don't beat yourself up about Jumba you've got his accent pretty well but it isn't as "jumbled" as "Jumba" really speaks so you could afford even more mistakes like quote: "This is he him speaking." along those lines is perfect so keep it up.
Although the poll for naming Naruto is over I also support the majority that she name him after a form of kitsune since he'll obviously be a fox-like alien experiment "made for to be epitome of cute and cuddly while retaining all powers of 626."
Also just to add this in: I'm personally debating whether or not you'll have Jumba give him an Advanced Speech Program like he did for 625 or have standard speech capabilities like Stitch or none at all but judging by how you had the choices being she name him instead of him telling her I'm going to supposed several things:
He forgot who he is (can't tell her)
He can't speak at all (can't tell her)
He decides to give up his previous persona (choose not to)
He's too confused (he's caught up in the situation with chaos centering on him as he rampages until they capture him)
Anyway I'm subscribing to this story to alert me for updates.
5/15/2011 c1 1DarkSpark20354
For the first poll: yes there should be a lemon for 624 and whoever your OC is. And for the second poll: Naruto, just naruto and UPDATE THE DARN STORY ALREADY!
For the first poll: yes there should be a lemon for 624 and whoever your OC is. And for the second poll: Naruto, just naruto and UPDATE THE DARN STORY ALREADY!
3/12/2011 c1 6cross2318
have him tell them his name and story if you are wondering what he should be named.
have him tell them his name and story if you are wondering what he should be named.
2/8/2011 c1 24Juubi no Shinju
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE! I HAVE READ THIS CHAPTER 3 TIMES, WAITING FOR YOU TO UPDATE. If you have any goodness in your heart, you would update soon.
YOU HAVE TO CONTINUE! I HAVE READ THIS CHAPTER 3 TIMES, WAITING FOR YOU TO UPDATE. If you have any goodness in your heart, you would update soon.