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10/9 c5 corjca1
leave the howler monkey slut kibba dogs cock sucker and the fag emo buttboy himself to die
10/9 c2 corjca1
dog breath getting nuted
10/9 c1 corjca1
theres the real demons do those abominations think there going to heaven get a grip your sinned against an inocent child hell is waiting for thee
10/9 c16 Lewito
at this point this look more like hinata x haku just those two
9/24 c14 Ethan Rhodes
\"Y-you bitch!" Unkei coughed out right before he threw up on the arena floor./

When i read this bit my dog went from relax to straight up alert like he heard something only he could hear lol
9/11 c17 ThatoneguyC
So that was stupid. If you made naruto smart why the hell would he give him a free shot or take on three other people. You made him way too cocky, and everyone would reprimand him for that and he would get promoted. They would compare him to sasuke for that.
8/7 c7 Exargna
Sasuke's hyperbolization and deterioration of his character are annoying. Sakura has become the worst version of herself. Author what is your problem? Sasuke was arrogant in the canon, but he was not such a terrible freak, he had a normal interaction with the team, and even after escaping from Orochimaru, he created his own team... I like it when the characters are pressed into their cons with their faces, but I hate it when the characters turn into their worst side.
7/22 c22 Guest
Finally someone tells her to her face that she is a cowardly bitch. She isn’t worthy of being hokage in any way shape or form and whoever even suggested her name should be jailed for treason against konoha.
7/15 c15 bill4994
Excellent chapter ! Good to see some A-holes getting their just desserts at last.
7/15 c14 bill4994
Good chapter. Lots pf humor and some good character interaction. Keep up the good work.
7/15 c13 bill4994
Gooe chapter but 1 mistake in the first sentense you said teams 8 & 10 not 8 & 11 . Still a good read. Major bummer with team 7 making the pass.
7/15 c12 bill4994
Good chapter. nice work on the prep to the exams through the first,and into the fight with the Kumo teams and execution and the mental stress suffered by the trauma of first kill at face to face and looking as their life fades away.
7/15 c11 bill4994
Exceptionally well written chapter ! Well thought out plan and wise advice to be wary of possible threats,how to respond,and to be aware of spies. Keep up the great work !
7/13 c9 bill4994
Good chapter but as a former veteran I find such actions deserve immediate and severe
7/13 c7 bill4994
Wonderful end to the mission. Looking to see Haku and Hinata react to each other. Keep up the good work !
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