for Times Of Our Lives2/6/2010 c2 
13Woodrow Graham Kenobi-Rimmer
OH BABY. lol. I like it, keep writing. I like your matter-of-factness.
13Woodrow Graham Kenobi-RimmerOH BABY. lol. I like it, keep writing. I like your matter-of-factness.
2/6/2010 c2 Iziie Lestrange
WOW! Hot hot Sylar, huh?
You wouldn't believe how clean is to read without all those confusing points of view, much much better this way.
I'm anxious to know what Sylar's gonna do now, but I must say, Sylar being Claire roommate is so much fun. I'll definitly enjoy it. Update soon, please.
xoxo, Lestrange.
WOW! Hot hot Sylar, huh?
You wouldn't believe how clean is to read without all those confusing points of view, much much better this way.
I'm anxious to know what Sylar's gonna do now, but I must say, Sylar being Claire roommate is so much fun. I'll definitly enjoy it. Update soon, please.
xoxo, Lestrange.
2/4/2010 c1 Iziie Lestrange
I liked the plot very much, though I honestly think you should avoid these short POVs, for the benefit o the writing quality. Either you could make the POV's longer or write the whole chapter in only one point of view. But, ya know, this is just my opinion. But all in all, I'm realy looking forward to know what happens next, so I'm putting the story in my Alert list. I expect you to update soon.
I liked the plot very much, though I honestly think you should avoid these short POVs, for the benefit o the writing quality. Either you could make the POV's longer or write the whole chapter in only one point of view. But, ya know, this is just my opinion. But all in all, I'm realy looking forward to know what happens next, so I'm putting the story in my Alert list. I expect you to update soon.
1/20/2010 c1 anon
Please continue, this is good and FF needs more Sylaires!
Please continue, this is good and FF needs more Sylaires!