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10/28/2020 c1 Guest
Funny and profound...I hope you're safe and still telling stories, wherever you are!
5/27/2016 c1 Discogma
This was creative, and amazing...
4/23/2016 c1 6justreidabook
Sweeeeeet
8/12/2011 c1 7Zero612
This is a great one-shot you have written. Im glad to have read it.
3/19/2011 c1 29DelightedlyLost
This...this was awesome. I don't know how but you managed to make something so simple and make it so poignant. I fully applaud you, even if it is older than dirt :P Wonderful job my friend, very well done.

Insanity Signing OFF!
12/6/2010 c1 ContiWolnaes
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9/20/2010 c1 Bob's Pie
I think there's enough said, so the most obvious thing to say is

greats job

just absolutely great job
9/3/2010 c1 16ShadowMan90
Impressively written. A refreshing change from alot of the excuses for fics I've waded through in this category. :)
7/17/2010 c1 6Scirrhia
I actually wasn't expecting all that much from this. In fact, I almost didn't click on the title at all. I'm hella glad I did. Great story. Funny, sincere, and heartwarming. A fantastic example of Halo fanfiction and even fiction in general. Keep up the good work.
2/20/2010 c1 1ChocoParfait
You are a great author and i was surprised by the ending. Be it a shock, though, the story is great and i took great pleasure in reading it.
2/6/2010 c1 5ruff1298
Very nice story. Inter-species interaction between the Humans and the Covenant always proves to be rather interesting and at times comedic, but the end of this with the Elite's realization that this man was a soldier who should be pitied and told that his comrades should rest in peace was a very nice touch.
1/19/2010 c1 1Dragoonfliy
This story just really fills me with this kind on whimsical hope and giggles, tinged with that all too familiar war story sadness and apprehension.

I can't really say much about it except that it's really absolutely amazing. Love it. Perfect.
1/18/2010 c1 anotamous
Do you have any military service record, because this sounds kinda like something a war veteran would say. That said, this is a nice fic.
1/18/2010 c1 waylsind
This was a great story. The concept was unique and interesting, and the writing was great. The characters were believable and I liked the scenario and the twist at the end. I liked how you made the description follow the typical "joke format" with 4 guys getting into an elevator or something like that.
1/17/2010 c1 1breaking ground
This was pretty good as well as different from the norm.

While there was a couple of jokes I wouldnt class this as humor. None the less this is going to my favorites.
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