for According to You3/21/2010 c1 
7Scarlet Hour
Hm, I was curious about the song in this story so I had to take a look...
I'm glad I did: I think the song fits very nicely and I also really liked your use of language such as with "Kyo was there like a wall I have to climb to be with him". The descriptions about Hinata and Naruto were also very accurate. Sasuke was a little ooc, but eh, he might come around in a few years, right? :D Anyway, nice story!
7Scarlet HourHm, I was curious about the song in this story so I had to take a look...
I'm glad I did: I think the song fits very nicely and I also really liked your use of language such as with "Kyo was there like a wall I have to climb to be with him". The descriptions about Hinata and Naruto were also very accurate. Sasuke was a little ooc, but eh, he might come around in a few years, right? :D Anyway, nice story!
3/1/2010 c1 17ish.the.abstract
I like the affectionate Sasuke...my advice here is the same (don't be mad at me)...background story and you'd maybe like to not use dashes, trust me, it'll be more inviting to read and much, much lovelier on the page, don't you think?
your strength is that you're true to the song and so songfics are your thing
p.s. nope, you can't kidnap sasuke, he's already with me...haha
17ish.the.abstractI like the affectionate Sasuke...my advice here is the same (don't be mad at me)...background story and you'd maybe like to not use dashes, trust me, it'll be more inviting to read and much, much lovelier on the page, don't you think?
your strength is that you're true to the song and so songfics are your thing
p.s. nope, you can't kidnap sasuke, he's already with me...haha
2/24/2010 c1 IAMNOBODY
:o the only thing i wished happended was the sakura or sasuke kicked kyo's ass xD lol
it was cut though :D
:o the only thing i wished happended was the sakura or sasuke kicked kyo's ass xD lol
it was cut though :D