4/8/2015 c3 jess.c.kong
I totally missed the near Blink-182 reference! If you hadn't said anything first, I would still be oblivious! I love the paper chasing scene! Not only because it's when Iruka discovers the identity of his stalker, but because you did a great job of portraying each characters' perspectives (ie you had Kakashi remember that memory but did a great job of not revealing too much during his POV). Both sides were really well written and captured really nice, raw, and vulnerable emotions that made you sympathize and root for them to make a move. I love Iruka and how he took advantage of taking action first...between the frightened puppy look and the scene where Iruka blindfolds himself during dinner, his attempts to snag Kakashi is endearing. And Kakashi's protectiveness is admirable. This was definitely worth reading! Thank you for sharing!
I totally missed the near Blink-182 reference! If you hadn't said anything first, I would still be oblivious! I love the paper chasing scene! Not only because it's when Iruka discovers the identity of his stalker, but because you did a great job of portraying each characters' perspectives (ie you had Kakashi remember that memory but did a great job of not revealing too much during his POV). Both sides were really well written and captured really nice, raw, and vulnerable emotions that made you sympathize and root for them to make a move. I love Iruka and how he took advantage of taking action first...between the frightened puppy look and the scene where Iruka blindfolds himself during dinner, his attempts to snag Kakashi is endearing. And Kakashi's protectiveness is admirable. This was definitely worth reading! Thank you for sharing!
4/11/2010 c3 Irukaxkakashi D
love it :D
:D
Please update!
love it :D
:D
Please update!
2/16/2010 c2 Ale
Update please!
Is a very good story!
Update please!
Is a very good story!
1/29/2010 c2 kathia
SO BEAUTIFUL STORY, why do you want to kill them? please din`t .i hope your story will have a happy end.
SO BEAUTIFUL STORY, why do you want to kill them? please din`t .i hope your story will have a happy end.
1/29/2010 c2 sara
this story is so romantic, so lovely, i hope kakashi will do something and tell iruka his feeling. thank you and please hurry for update.
this story is so romantic, so lovely, i hope kakashi will do something and tell iruka his feeling. thank you and please hurry for update.
1/27/2010 c2 gothic puppy
aw that's adorable!
aw that's adorable!
1/23/2010 c2 Kimi Ai chan
Cute sweet and funny too!
and there are alot of Iruka death fics... 0_0 I never thought about it before...
Cute sweet and funny too!
and there are alot of Iruka death fics... 0_0 I never thought about it before...