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2/18/2011 c3 bob
more please.
12/29/2010 c3 13borg rabbit
Haiku fu:

Excellent story

Sad to hear that your muse fled

Lure with cash not crumbs

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12/25/2010 c3 HolyKnight5
Vader would become interested and use all his skill to try to shot down an Alpha or Beta, without damaging it much...
11/12/2010 c3 Toby
Good start

Robotech das help in a few areas,but you can't make it all powerful against all Starwars tech.

Try to show Balance in the story.

The Empire will get to capture a fighter.

Super-tech das not Guaranteed success,the story becoming Boing if it das.
11/10/2010 c3 Eduardo
A update! I am amazed and surprised, I was thinking you gave up on this story! Also no fist fight between a RDF Armor platform against the Executor! The Executor is 19,000 meters long, that is about tweleve miles long, and has over four thousand weapons! A RDF Armor I believe is nothing more than a mere 400 meters long, and a dozen weapons! Unless the REF can star creating Reflex Cannons on Rebel Alliance captial ships, forget it! Maybe you could somehow get the Rebel Alliance to create their own version of the SDF-1.

If you need help, look up anything about Robotech. Also Robotech RPG books, they will give you info and other data.
11/7/2010 c3 a
i like to see armd-07 victory and the executor fight it out.
11/7/2010 c3 a
keep up the good work. i like it.
10/25/2010 c3 2Angurvddel
A quote from this chapter:

The Guardian mode fighters roared in, Muck in the lead as he dropped down while avoiding cannon fire and landed right next to one of the AT-ST Scout Walkers. The chicken legged, boxy Walker turned to face him, but he had already shifted to Battleoid and one of his armored, robotic fits came in low in an uppercut. The punch from the mecha crushed the Walkers chin mounted blasters and knocked it off balance, tumbling it to the ground.

All I could think of after reading this was: SHORYUKEN!

Nice story, I look forward to more.
10/23/2010 c3 ariel stormcloud
great story
10/22/2010 c3 17readerofgoodfanfiction
Nice battle, the Robotech tech weaponry is showing it's worth even though they have to retreat from the battle it will make the Imperials job to fight the Rebel Alliance harder now than ever once the Rebel gets to replicate the VT,Destroids and Power Armors.
10/21/2010 c3 marc
great story, keep up the good work!f
10/21/2010 c3 GeshronTyler
Oho, continuing, are we? Nice to see the RDF managing to do some good. I'd say the RDF might have munitions problems in the near future though. Considering the resources of a SD flottila, I expect the RDF might fire itself dry, or close to it, in helping to cover the evacuation.

Thanks, read you next time.
10/20/2010 c3 27SSJ-Jolt
Good to see an update.

There is a way around the Protoculture problem...

Canonically the VF-1 was fusion powered, in fact protoculture wasn't a major fuel source until New Generation. So if the Rebels did make thier own Veritechs theyd use the VF-1 as the base.
10/20/2010 c3 Vandenbz
Good to see that Han didn't have to rely on a dead tauntaun to save Luke, the Beta is a much better choice. Amazing job with including the REF forces in the battle against the Imperials. I wonder if it'll be one of the REF pilots who recommends the use of tow cables against the walkers. I can see a REF pilot use a cable from a downed speeder to tie up an AT-AT himself. The fight in space is even more impressive, TIE fighters are weak compared to the Veritechs. I can't wait to see one of the Alphas put a few rounds through the bridge viewport of a Star Destroyer. Darth Vader's reaction to these superior fighters and that warship is bound to be great. Please update soon!
10/20/2010 c3 Inquisitor0
thx for the update...looking forward to the next one...was wondering if there will be any upgrades on the VFs and Cyclones...the VF's like the Alpha is large enough to have a hyperdrive, astromech droid as well as an additional shields, the same with the Beta fighters...as for heavier ordnances, the proton torpedoes are supposed to be the size of a mini missile and could be added on a hardpoint...as for the Cyclones, instead of the wheels, maybe a high maneuverability repulsors as well as a more improved engine to provide thrust...the extra power could allow the cyclones to carry heavier weapons that can actually take out an AT-ST if it's not already carrying that rail gun from the Shadow Chronicles RPG...

does the Victory carry any VM-9L Silverbacks for at least doing the heavy lifting inside the hangar bay and can be armed when needed...that would had been very useful for ground operations and can be upgraded with repulsors and heavier weapons to match the AT-ST or even take out a AT-AT if it concentrated its fire on the weapons turret and legs...the Silverbacks could be the Rebels' version of their AT-ST...was also wondering if there's any VHT Spartas hovertanks, if not i assume that the mech engineers can build one if given access to its design and parts can be manufactured for it...the repulsors is an ideal replacement to be used on the hovertanks...

what i'd really like to see is a fighter scaled lightsabers or at least as a beam weapon attachment to the gunpods like a bayonnet that could fire beams as well as form a blade...

read back and realized that the ARMD-07 Victory had survived all three wars and currently at war with the Haydonites...i assume that the ship has pin point barrier capability if it doesn't have full barrier shields...i'm sure the rebels would gladly upgrade the ship with shields...maybe it might have the shadow cloaking device but probably been disabled due to the Haydonites tampering...finally since the Victory is supposed to have been used for experimental equipment, does it have the synchro cannons on it..i assume that the synchro cannons can pass thru imperial shields...anyway if u like to get those new Robotech RPG books in pdf format i have them and can email it to u if u can't find it on the net...
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