2/4/2010 c1 4XxiceflamexX
Aw, I feel so sorry for Sirius. -pats Siri- Awesome one-shot, keep up the awesome work! x
Aw, I feel so sorry for Sirius. -pats Siri- Awesome one-shot, keep up the awesome work! x
1/19/2010 c1 38loveislouder94
Very good! The shorter sentences serve to emphasise the emotions you bring across, accurately portraying the vulnerable side of Sirius that isn't seen in the books. Well done. :)
Very good! The shorter sentences serve to emphasise the emotions you bring across, accurately portraying the vulnerable side of Sirius that isn't seen in the books. Well done. :)