for Heart and Soul6/5 c80 
1DoraLupinTonks
Wow! that was a thrilling ride. Your writing is so mature and the way you have dealth with each issues that have always bugged me... technically the whole 5th year and the subsequent years...you have written thexact way it should have been done. I especially like your characterization of Dumbledore, Harry and Snape. i am going to check out your other hp fanfics, if there are more... its 3:16am and i am still keyed up from this amazing story...i actually binged read it and only slept when i couldnt keep my eyes open... its mind-blowing! thank you...it was such a treat.
1DoraLupinTonksWow! that was a thrilling ride. Your writing is so mature and the way you have dealth with each issues that have always bugged me... technically the whole 5th year and the subsequent years...you have written thexact way it should have been done. I especially like your characterization of Dumbledore, Harry and Snape. i am going to check out your other hp fanfics, if there are more... its 3:16am and i am still keyed up from this amazing story...i actually binged read it and only slept when i couldnt keep my eyes open... its mind-blowing! thank you...it was such a treat.
5/30 c10 kblankenship1025
9 chapters in and i fell like I’m still drinking coffee and the waitress hasn’t even came to take my order yet. Is not neccesarily bad but i don’t think i want to read another 70 chapters of fluff. There’s so far been zero substance to the story. Too many POVs. It’s not enhancing the story. It’s diluting it. I’m not saying you should have them be madly in love by chapter 4 because I’d also stop reading but so far everything else dwarfs Harry and his sudden change in circumstance.
9 chapters in and i fell like I’m still drinking coffee and the waitress hasn’t even came to take my order yet. Is not neccesarily bad but i don’t think i want to read another 70 chapters of fluff. There’s so far been zero substance to the story. Too many POVs. It’s not enhancing the story. It’s diluting it. I’m not saying you should have them be madly in love by chapter 4 because I’d also stop reading but so far everything else dwarfs Harry and his sudden change in circumstance.
5/30 c8 kblankenship1025
Too many PoVs. So far it doesn’t seem like Ron is gonna be majorly important so stop putting his view. Same with Ginny. They are not the main character and as of yet we haven’t got to see the major changes for Harry or how it affects them.
Too many PoVs. So far it doesn’t seem like Ron is gonna be majorly important so stop putting his view. Same with Ginny. They are not the main character and as of yet we haven’t got to see the major changes for Harry or how it affects them.
5/22 c17 xOdie
Thank you for your writing this story. I really appreciate your creativity of how you portray the characters.
The ending of this chapter though, in a word is: yuck! The way Molly treated Hermione by writing a howler is absolutely not proper. You let her off too easily with barely a wrist slap. She should at least write an apology to Hermione, and really should apologize to her publicly. (What is the reverse of a howler?)
I am a Harry/Hermione shipper. I think JKR did a disservice to the series in her epilogue. (Tired of the story? Just wanted to throw something together?) I like where this story is headed, and enjoy reading it very much. Thank you for taking the time to write a very interesting, completed story.
Thank you for your writing this story. I really appreciate your creativity of how you portray the characters.
The ending of this chapter though, in a word is: yuck! The way Molly treated Hermione by writing a howler is absolutely not proper. You let her off too easily with barely a wrist slap. She should at least write an apology to Hermione, and really should apologize to her publicly. (What is the reverse of a howler?)
I am a Harry/Hermione shipper. I think JKR did a disservice to the series in her epilogue. (Tired of the story? Just wanted to throw something together?) I like where this story is headed, and enjoy reading it very much. Thank you for taking the time to write a very interesting, completed story.
4/26 c80 TyDM
Great story. Though Harry is a bit presumptuous at the end...
Harry, "My child will be your heir, and inherit everything!"
Fred and J.S. share a look with each other.
J.S., "I'll take that under consideration."
Great story. Though Harry is a bit presumptuous at the end...
Harry, "My child will be your heir, and inherit everything!"
Fred and J.S. share a look with each other.
J.S., "I'll take that under consideration."
4/5 c1 IronHair
Rereading
Rereading
3/26 c10 AndySerri
The problem with traning so many people at once and barely focusing on it is that we have no idea on the level in which each of them are at the moment.
The problem with traning so many people at once and barely focusing on it is that we have no idea on the level in which each of them are at the moment.
3/17 c23 Shizkane
Great chapter! And roger davis is being more suspicious as time flies... i don't trust him.
Great chapter! And roger davis is being more suspicious as time flies... i don't trust him.
2/26 c11 Mutant Ascension
It always amuses me and irritate me whenever I read a story where there's some nonsense about how far behind socially the magical world is to the muggle world. I really would like to know which muggle world these writers live in because the muggle world I live in last at my check every single model nation on this planet without exception is overflowing with discrimination and bigotry. After all humans are a Xenophobic by nature one group will always believe they are better than another group 41 reason or another. So there will never not be discrimination, Also how exactly is it that the government making laws that states is illegal for grown consenting adults to marry as many Partners as they want, at the same time how is that social progress? that is not social progress at all especially since it's a stupid law made entirely on two things that being money and religion that they believe in. But such a system is what Hermione would see as being socially progressive?
Perhaps Hermione should take Auror Shacklebolt, Padma/Parvati, and Cho Chang on a trip around London and then to America, Italy, Spain and other European muggle countries and see just how socially progressive muggles are.
It always amuses me and irritate me whenever I read a story where there's some nonsense about how far behind socially the magical world is to the muggle world. I really would like to know which muggle world these writers live in because the muggle world I live in last at my check every single model nation on this planet without exception is overflowing with discrimination and bigotry. After all humans are a Xenophobic by nature one group will always believe they are better than another group 41 reason or another. So there will never not be discrimination, Also how exactly is it that the government making laws that states is illegal for grown consenting adults to marry as many Partners as they want, at the same time how is that social progress? that is not social progress at all especially since it's a stupid law made entirely on two things that being money and religion that they believe in. But such a system is what Hermione would see as being socially progressive?
Perhaps Hermione should take Auror Shacklebolt, Padma/Parvati, and Cho Chang on a trip around London and then to America, Italy, Spain and other European muggle countries and see just how socially progressive muggles are.
2/16 c5 Mutant Ascension
As much as I hate the Dursleys, Vernon It's not wrong if Harry had not been forced upon them then they would never have had to face any dangerous from the magical world and their son certainly wouldn't have almost gotten his soul eaten by Dementor. That's not really Harris fault either that falls at the feet of Dumbledore because he is the one that decided to stick his crooked nose into Harry's life for some odd reason I still don't understand how he had the authority to do that but I guess he made use of his political power. Because I'm quite certain that Lily and James should definitely have a will, there's no way they wouldn't both of them are very intelligent People and they were fighting on the front lines against voldemort for years they certainly would have come to the conclusion that they could die at any time. And if nothing else after Lily was confirmed pregnant they definitely wrote one then.
Truly I do get so tired of seeing this cliche when I read stories with Fleur as Harry's partner. The 2 of them together are my favorite parents out of all followed by Hermione and Ginny and Susan bones etc et cetera. However it is extremely annoying when I keep running to decline where 90% of Harry and Fleur fence fictions always have the stupid fashion in it either for some reason Harry and Hermione and Ron are no longer friends on hermin's part it is completely unjustified hermonia has never done anything to signify she would hold Harry back from being the best that he can be it is quite the opposite she's constantly nagging him trying to get him to live up to that potential that he has. On wrong side it is more understandable that their friendship would fall out when Harry's determined to be the best he can because of Ron's self-esteem issues and his inferiority complex among other things. Honestly after fourth year their friendship should have ended because such a betrayal there's really no forgiving that, and regaining the trust they once had. Especially considering just a year before in third year he found out that one of his Father's best friends who he literally put the lives of his son and his precious wife in (because I'm sure James valued their lives more than his own) betrayed them and caused their death. So when Ron decided to betray him in fourth year when he needed him most, yeah there was no way that friendship should have been restarted he should not have forgiven Ron for that.
Or in the case of situation like this where you do with Ginny So dirty for the sake of drama I mean yes in the book she had a crush on Harry but it was just that a crush you have literally taken a crush and turned it into an obsession like what snape had for Lily. The feelings Ginny had for Harry and what snape had for lily cannot be equated with each other it is not the same thing she just had a crush and as we saw in the books she got over it heck if I remember correctly it was Harry that approached her for a relationship in 6 year not her, she had already been dating other people by that time and everything. Doing all of this for unnecessary drama seems completely pointless to me. I can never understand why cliches that make no sense are always so popular yet the ones that make sense are rarely used.
Anyway, the Hermione and Ginny talk was interesting and I think this is the first fanfiction I have read that has this Ginny being obsessed with Harry nonsense and Hermione talks some sense into her. Also Hermione having the realization that she too still have romantic feelings for Harry despite him being betrothed is rather amusing. I have a deep appreciation for self aware people
Fleur's reaction to the situation is very understandable and at least she is keeping an open mind about it.
As much as I hate the Dursleys, Vernon It's not wrong if Harry had not been forced upon them then they would never have had to face any dangerous from the magical world and their son certainly wouldn't have almost gotten his soul eaten by Dementor. That's not really Harris fault either that falls at the feet of Dumbledore because he is the one that decided to stick his crooked nose into Harry's life for some odd reason I still don't understand how he had the authority to do that but I guess he made use of his political power. Because I'm quite certain that Lily and James should definitely have a will, there's no way they wouldn't both of them are very intelligent People and they were fighting on the front lines against voldemort for years they certainly would have come to the conclusion that they could die at any time. And if nothing else after Lily was confirmed pregnant they definitely wrote one then.
Truly I do get so tired of seeing this cliche when I read stories with Fleur as Harry's partner. The 2 of them together are my favorite parents out of all followed by Hermione and Ginny and Susan bones etc et cetera. However it is extremely annoying when I keep running to decline where 90% of Harry and Fleur fence fictions always have the stupid fashion in it either for some reason Harry and Hermione and Ron are no longer friends on hermin's part it is completely unjustified hermonia has never done anything to signify she would hold Harry back from being the best that he can be it is quite the opposite she's constantly nagging him trying to get him to live up to that potential that he has. On wrong side it is more understandable that their friendship would fall out when Harry's determined to be the best he can because of Ron's self-esteem issues and his inferiority complex among other things. Honestly after fourth year their friendship should have ended because such a betrayal there's really no forgiving that, and regaining the trust they once had. Especially considering just a year before in third year he found out that one of his Father's best friends who he literally put the lives of his son and his precious wife in (because I'm sure James valued their lives more than his own) betrayed them and caused their death. So when Ron decided to betray him in fourth year when he needed him most, yeah there was no way that friendship should have been restarted he should not have forgiven Ron for that.
Or in the case of situation like this where you do with Ginny So dirty for the sake of drama I mean yes in the book she had a crush on Harry but it was just that a crush you have literally taken a crush and turned it into an obsession like what snape had for Lily. The feelings Ginny had for Harry and what snape had for lily cannot be equated with each other it is not the same thing she just had a crush and as we saw in the books she got over it heck if I remember correctly it was Harry that approached her for a relationship in 6 year not her, she had already been dating other people by that time and everything. Doing all of this for unnecessary drama seems completely pointless to me. I can never understand why cliches that make no sense are always so popular yet the ones that make sense are rarely used.
Anyway, the Hermione and Ginny talk was interesting and I think this is the first fanfiction I have read that has this Ginny being obsessed with Harry nonsense and Hermione talks some sense into her. Also Hermione having the realization that she too still have romantic feelings for Harry despite him being betrothed is rather amusing. I have a deep appreciation for self aware people
Fleur's reaction to the situation is very understandable and at least she is keeping an open mind about it.