for Heart and Soul5/3/2024 c11 
40Concolor44
Good talk. Very good. I'm sure Hermione will make the right decision.
Ron, on the other hand, is going to find out soon enough that he has no chance with her, and that could make things ... tense.
40Concolor44Good talk. Very good. I'm sure Hermione will make the right decision.
Ron, on the other hand, is going to find out soon enough that he has no chance with her, and that could make things ... tense.
5/3/2024 c9 Concolor44
I'm pleased that you aren't "Ron-bashing" here. You've truthfully pointed out his flaws, but shown that he's working on them (some of them ... to a degree) and trying to do better. That said, I fear he will crash and burn when Hermione inevitably turns him down on the "boyfriend" thing. When he does, it is likely to be ugly.
I'm pleased that you aren't "Ron-bashing" here. You've truthfully pointed out his flaws, but shown that he's working on them (some of them ... to a degree) and trying to do better. That said, I fear he will crash and burn when Hermione inevitably turns him down on the "boyfriend" thing. When he does, it is likely to be ugly.
5/1/2024 c18 G Fawkes
Does your Harry not remember? The only way anyone got OUT of "The Chamber" was for Fawkes to FLY them out, magically weightless.
Are they supposed to bring brooms with them? Most students don't HAVE brooms at school.
Does your Harry not remember? The only way anyone got OUT of "The Chamber" was for Fawkes to FLY them out, magically weightless.
Are they supposed to bring brooms with them? Most students don't HAVE brooms at school.
5/1/2024 c17 G Fawkes
But, the stupid , screaming, harpy needs to apologize to Hermione!
But, the stupid , screaming, harpy needs to apologize to Hermione!
4/30/2024 c16 G Fawkes
No big deal. Ron's a dick.
No big deal. Ron's a dick.
4/30/2024 c15 G Fawkes
Ron's a dick. Don't feel bad.
Ron's a dick. Don't feel bad.
5/2/2024 c8 Concolor44
The Umbitch has to be one of the most unpleasant characters in all of fiction. I can't WAIT to see what you have in store for her.
The Umbitch has to be one of the most unpleasant characters in all of fiction. I can't WAIT to see what you have in store for her.
4/29/2024 c13 G Fawkes
Snape has never even once, ever, showed any "good teacher" abilities. Pointing at the board, and saying "your instructions are on the board" is not teaching. There is NO Canon evidence he has EVER taught anyone, anything.
Snape has never even once, ever, showed any "good teacher" abilities. Pointing at the board, and saying "your instructions are on the board" is not teaching. There is NO Canon evidence he has EVER taught anyone, anything.
4/28/2024 c10 G Fawkes
Ron's a dick. You've got your finger in the dike, trying to make him nice.
Ron's a dick. You've got your finger in the dike, trying to make him nice.
4/29/2024 c4 Concolor44
I like Jean-Sebastian, but he sure is dissing a lot of gruntles there in England.
I like Jean-Sebastian, but he sure is dissing a lot of gruntles there in England.
4/27/2024 c8 G Fawkes
And in the interim... Fleur is teaching Harry everything he will need to know about... cunninlingus.
Oh, come on! She's French!
And in the interim... Fleur is teaching Harry everything he will need to know about... cunninlingus.
Oh, come on! She's French!
4/26/2024 c7 G Fawkes
Dumbledore WAS the Wizengamut Head at the time of Voldemort's fall. Fudge is the one that wasn't in his office, yet. The sheeple put Dumbles in charge of the Wiz after he 'defeated' Grindewald. Its Dumbasadoor's fault the Aurors weren't allowed to just kill the bad guys, preaching 'stun and release', by way of bribery.
Dumbledore WAS the Wizengamut Head at the time of Voldemort's fall. Fudge is the one that wasn't in his office, yet. The sheeple put Dumbles in charge of the Wiz after he 'defeated' Grindewald. Its Dumbasadoor's fault the Aurors weren't allowed to just kill the bad guys, preaching 'stun and release', by way of bribery.
4/25/2024 c3 Guest
I’ve started and stopped reading this chapter so many times recently. The later part of it is just a slog to get through. The dialogue is just unrealistic and awkward to read. Also, while I know other cultures don’t use the word “sir” as regularly as the Southern United States does, why ask to be called a four syllable name when a single syllable word is quicker and easier?
I’ve started and stopped reading this chapter so many times recently. The later part of it is just a slog to get through. The dialogue is just unrealistic and awkward to read. Also, while I know other cultures don’t use the word “sir” as regularly as the Southern United States does, why ask to be called a four syllable name when a single syllable word is quicker and easier?
4/26/2024 c18 gryphindoros
this IS NOT harrys fault its hermoines and fleur placing blame on harry is rediculous
this IS NOT harrys fault its hermoines and fleur placing blame on harry is rediculous