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1bleachorange
My mental image of Umbridge has always been Baba from Dragonball Z, but in pink. I know its not quite realistic, but I cant help it - it works so well
1bleachorangeMy mental image of Umbridge has always been Baba from Dragonball Z, but in pink. I know its not quite realistic, but I cant help it - it works so well
12/17/2024 c14 Animeworld2.0
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12/15/2024 c67 KanameZeroYuki
Well, they have every right to be angry, and to let him know where he messed up exactly. But threatening the possibility of the end of a relationship to make the point rubs me the wrong way. Also, they need to understand what its like knowing you are hosting carrying the soul of your parents' murderer around. It's bound to affect him in awful ways.
Well, they have every right to be angry, and to let him know where he messed up exactly. But threatening the possibility of the end of a relationship to make the point rubs me the wrong way. Also, they need to understand what its like knowing you are hosting carrying the soul of your parents' murderer around. It's bound to affect him in awful ways.
12/15/2024 c59 KanameZeroYuki
To be fair... they really should know better than to berate him by now, all it does is piss him off.
To be fair... they really should know better than to berate him by now, all it does is piss him off.
12/7/2024 c19 KanameZeroYuki
I stand corrected. The scene where they talked about how heavy handed the girls were on Harry helped alleviate my feelings about the situation. I will try to remind myself not to make immediate judgements in the future.
I stand corrected. The scene where they talked about how heavy handed the girls were on Harry helped alleviate my feelings about the situation. I will try to remind myself not to make immediate judgements in the future.
12/6/2024 c18 1OhJustReadIt
The review below me is absolutely right. Emotionally manipulating Harry to agree is not right and then when he finally blows up, reprimanding him is also not right.
Is he his own man or a mannequin about to be told off on everything by his two girls? If I see more instances of this, then sorry this story is not for me.
1OhJustReadItThe review below me is absolutely right. Emotionally manipulating Harry to agree is not right and then when he finally blows up, reprimanding him is also not right.
Is he his own man or a mannequin about to be told off on everything by his two girls? If I see more instances of this, then sorry this story is not for me.
12/5/2024 c18 KanameZeroYuki
The way they basically nagged him about the club until they got what they wanted was not ok. He had every right to be upset. Maybe not have yelled that way, but right to be upset. The way they went about it was emotional manipulation in my books. I'll keep reading for now, but if I come across another couple instances of no one considering Harry's feelings, I may not finish the fic. Great writing, though. Just not a fan of the way the girls are acting right now.
The way they basically nagged him about the club until they got what they wanted was not ok. He had every right to be upset. Maybe not have yelled that way, but right to be upset. The way they went about it was emotional manipulation in my books. I'll keep reading for now, but if I come across another couple instances of no one considering Harry's feelings, I may not finish the fic. Great writing, though. Just not a fan of the way the girls are acting right now.
12/4/2024 c11 Pillager61
About 3 reviews down is "RK" ranting about unreal connections between people.
I believe he/she is full of Beans.
The relationships were Not instantly there, things has been building for several chapters, with the adjunct of magical reading of Love connections it does speed it up.
Also, I'm LOVING THIS STORY.
About 3 reviews down is "RK" ranting about unreal connections between people.
I believe he/she is full of Beans.
The relationships were Not instantly there, things has been building for several chapters, with the adjunct of magical reading of Love connections it does speed it up.
Also, I'm LOVING THIS STORY.
11/13/2024 c4 1Strider-SilverFang
has anyone else used the text to speach on this chapter? particularly on the line that says "we're his family," mrs. Weasley snapped? there is an entire paragraph of text in another language hidden in that line of text and i have no idea what it says since i don't speak the language.
1Strider-SilverFanghas anyone else used the text to speach on this chapter? particularly on the line that says "we're his family," mrs. Weasley snapped? there is an entire paragraph of text in another language hidden in that line of text and i have no idea what it says since i don't speak the language.
10/24/2024 c80 nad4.35
brilliant story... the entire journey has had me on tenter hooks and i hope to come back to it in a few years to read again.
i have yo say your writing style/method is amazing. the ending (pre-epilogue) feels satisfying, rushedfitting all at the same time. which is left me wanting more but also very happy for the harry et al.
i felt like my war came to an end and as i write this 2 hrs later still processing i need to find another atory to occupy myself with i feel like the ending is the most appropriate one ever as war never has clean endings and its all a buildup till it suddenly stops.
thank you for sharing this with the world, or atleast me, as its a triumph.
i hope you have more HP stories looking for a release. ciao and thank you again.
brilliant story... the entire journey has had me on tenter hooks and i hope to come back to it in a few years to read again.
i have yo say your writing style/method is amazing. the ending (pre-epilogue) feels satisfying, rushedfitting all at the same time. which is left me wanting more but also very happy for the harry et al.
i felt like my war came to an end and as i write this 2 hrs later still processing i need to find another atory to occupy myself with i feel like the ending is the most appropriate one ever as war never has clean endings and its all a buildup till it suddenly stops.
thank you for sharing this with the world, or atleast me, as its a triumph.
i hope you have more HP stories looking for a release. ciao and thank you again.
10/20/2024 c10 RK
ok i read the chapter to the end now:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ITS SO FORCED. they are sudenly in love- no build up. just... they never were anything but sibiling/friends but now they both sudenly are in love.
you just changed the fact because you wanted it (now some storys its done well with development and gradual change and then i dont mind) BUT LIKE THIS? ARE YOU KIDDING ME? you just forced them together and magiced them in love with each other
one of the most wastefull trowaways of what could have been an amazing story otherwise i have ever seen
ok i read the chapter to the end now:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ITS SO FORCED. they are sudenly in love- no build up. just... they never were anything but sibiling/friends but now they both sudenly are in love.
you just changed the fact because you wanted it (now some storys its done well with development and gradual change and then i dont mind) BUT LIKE THIS? ARE YOU KIDDING ME? you just forced them together and magiced them in love with each other
one of the most wastefull trowaways of what could have been an amazing story otherwise i have ever seen
10/20/2024 c10 RK
"but in an odd sort of way harry and hermione balanced each others strenghts and weaknesses rather well"
that "odd" has a name: beeing sibilings
im begging you dont do this- the char development and insight all around aswell as the pacing and flow of the story is so great- dont sacrifice/trow it all away just to force a harmony ship
"but in an odd sort of way harry and hermione balanced each others strenghts and weaknesses rather well"
that "odd" has a name: beeing sibilings
im begging you dont do this- the char development and insight all around aswell as the pacing and flow of the story is so great- dont sacrifice/trow it all away just to force a harmony ship
10/20/2024 c9 RK
this has definitly the shapeup of one of the best fics i have ever read
my only concern is this "can marry multiple". hermione and harry are sibilings and setup for years in the books. this story is after year 4 at which point its already extremly solidifyed. i suspect this fic will be one of the best if harry fleur stays and the other chars just develop around it.
the other alternative is that harry hermy and then the story crashes and burns...
its a make or break and quite frankly im scared
this has definitly the shapeup of one of the best fics i have ever read
my only concern is this "can marry multiple". hermione and harry are sibilings and setup for years in the books. this story is after year 4 at which point its already extremly solidifyed. i suspect this fic will be one of the best if harry fleur stays and the other chars just develop around it.
the other alternative is that harry hermy and then the story crashes and burns...
its a make or break and quite frankly im scared