for Heart and Soul12/4/2024 c11 Pillager61
About 3 reviews down is "RK" ranting about unreal connections between people.
I believe he/she is full of Beans.
The relationships were Not instantly there, things has been building for several chapters, with the adjunct of magical reading of Love connections it does speed it up.
Also, I'm LOVING THIS STORY.
About 3 reviews down is "RK" ranting about unreal connections between people.
I believe he/she is full of Beans.
The relationships were Not instantly there, things has been building for several chapters, with the adjunct of magical reading of Love connections it does speed it up.
Also, I'm LOVING THIS STORY.
11/13/2024 c4 
1Strider-SilverFang
has anyone else used the text to speach on this chapter? particularly on the line that says "we're his family," mrs. Weasley snapped? there is an entire paragraph of text in another language hidden in that line of text and i have no idea what it says since i don't speak the language.
1Strider-SilverFanghas anyone else used the text to speach on this chapter? particularly on the line that says "we're his family," mrs. Weasley snapped? there is an entire paragraph of text in another language hidden in that line of text and i have no idea what it says since i don't speak the language.
10/24/2024 c80 nad4.35
brilliant story... the entire journey has had me on tenter hooks and i hope to come back to it in a few years to read again.
i have yo say your writing style/method is amazing. the ending (pre-epilogue) feels satisfying, rushedfitting all at the same time. which is left me wanting more but also very happy for the harry et al.
i felt like my war came to an end and as i write this 2 hrs later still processing i need to find another atory to occupy myself with i feel like the ending is the most appropriate one ever as war never has clean endings and its all a buildup till it suddenly stops.
thank you for sharing this with the world, or atleast me, as its a triumph.
i hope you have more HP stories looking for a release. ciao and thank you again.
brilliant story... the entire journey has had me on tenter hooks and i hope to come back to it in a few years to read again.
i have yo say your writing style/method is amazing. the ending (pre-epilogue) feels satisfying, rushedfitting all at the same time. which is left me wanting more but also very happy for the harry et al.
i felt like my war came to an end and as i write this 2 hrs later still processing i need to find another atory to occupy myself with i feel like the ending is the most appropriate one ever as war never has clean endings and its all a buildup till it suddenly stops.
thank you for sharing this with the world, or atleast me, as its a triumph.
i hope you have more HP stories looking for a release. ciao and thank you again.
10/20/2024 c10 RK
ok i read the chapter to the end now:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ITS SO FORCED. they are sudenly in love- no build up. just... they never were anything but sibiling/friends but now they both sudenly are in love.
you just changed the fact because you wanted it (now some storys its done well with development and gradual change and then i dont mind) BUT LIKE THIS? ARE YOU KIDDING ME? you just forced them together and magiced them in love with each other
one of the most wastefull trowaways of what could have been an amazing story otherwise i have ever seen
ok i read the chapter to the end now:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO ITS SO FORCED. they are sudenly in love- no build up. just... they never were anything but sibiling/friends but now they both sudenly are in love.
you just changed the fact because you wanted it (now some storys its done well with development and gradual change and then i dont mind) BUT LIKE THIS? ARE YOU KIDDING ME? you just forced them together and magiced them in love with each other
one of the most wastefull trowaways of what could have been an amazing story otherwise i have ever seen
10/20/2024 c10 RK
"but in an odd sort of way harry and hermione balanced each others strenghts and weaknesses rather well"
that "odd" has a name: beeing sibilings
im begging you dont do this- the char development and insight all around aswell as the pacing and flow of the story is so great- dont sacrifice/trow it all away just to force a harmony ship
"but in an odd sort of way harry and hermione balanced each others strenghts and weaknesses rather well"
that "odd" has a name: beeing sibilings
im begging you dont do this- the char development and insight all around aswell as the pacing and flow of the story is so great- dont sacrifice/trow it all away just to force a harmony ship
10/20/2024 c9 RK
this has definitly the shapeup of one of the best fics i have ever read
my only concern is this "can marry multiple". hermione and harry are sibilings and setup for years in the books. this story is after year 4 at which point its already extremly solidifyed. i suspect this fic will be one of the best if harry fleur stays and the other chars just develop around it.
the other alternative is that harry hermy and then the story crashes and burns...
its a make or break and quite frankly im scared
this has definitly the shapeup of one of the best fics i have ever read
my only concern is this "can marry multiple". hermione and harry are sibilings and setup for years in the books. this story is after year 4 at which point its already extremly solidifyed. i suspect this fic will be one of the best if harry fleur stays and the other chars just develop around it.
the other alternative is that harry hermy and then the story crashes and burns...
its a make or break and quite frankly im scared
10/19/2024 c80 Beba Alq
Woow! What a great story so glad I found this, amazing writing I didn’t regret reading it.
Woow! What a great story so glad I found this, amazing writing I didn’t regret reading it.
10/10/2024 c7 FlawedBauthor
Everyone just rolls over and let's Dumbledore fuck them in the ass, huh? Dumbledore admitted that Harry would be abused, and here he doesn't deny it but just says it was a mistake, and JS says that's fine then. Dumbledore won't tell Harry the prophecy until he's 17 because he wants the abused kid that went through near two decades of unending hardship to have time to be a child, and JS agrees.
I hope you never write again, you brain dead freak.
Everyone just rolls over and let's Dumbledore fuck them in the ass, huh? Dumbledore admitted that Harry would be abused, and here he doesn't deny it but just says it was a mistake, and JS says that's fine then. Dumbledore won't tell Harry the prophecy until he's 17 because he wants the abused kid that went through near two decades of unending hardship to have time to be a child, and JS agrees.
I hope you never write again, you brain dead freak.
10/8/2024 c28 dixonjason403
goddammit im already sick of the will they/wont they bullshit. either shit or get off the pot, ya know?
goddammit im already sick of the will they/wont they bullshit. either shit or get off the pot, ya know?
10/8/2024 c16 dixonjason403
good for ron. he's still kinda childish and annoying, and i dont really care about him much as a character in this story, but you still gotta applaud the character growth. lets just hope it sticks, yeah?
good for ron. he's still kinda childish and annoying, and i dont really care about him much as a character in this story, but you still gotta applaud the character growth. lets just hope it sticks, yeah?
10/8/2024 c9 dixonjason403
im looking at the relationship tags...its not looking good for ickle ronniekins
im looking at the relationship tags...its not looking good for ickle ronniekins
10/8/2024 c5 dixonjason403
i really do wonder what umbridge is gonna do. are we gonna see some harcore magic racism?
i really do wonder what umbridge is gonna do. are we gonna see some harcore magic racism?
10/7/2024 c80 1Finnspa23
Nice epilogue! Thanks for sharing. Besides the slow going from ~ chapters 40-60 this was an incredible story.
1Finnspa23Nice epilogue! Thanks for sharing. Besides the slow going from ~ chapters 40-60 this was an incredible story.
10/7/2024 c70 Finnspa23
Things pick back up nicely in the last couple chapters for about 20 or so there it seemed like nothing new was happening. For anyone in that same funk as me, push through (skim heavily if needed). It seems like it's worth it!
Things pick back up nicely in the last couple chapters for about 20 or so there it seemed like nothing new was happening. For anyone in that same funk as me, push through (skim heavily if needed). It seems like it's worth it!
10/7/2024 c67 Finnspa23
They all continually harp on Harry going "alone" but literally none of them can argue that they could've gone unless they wanted to become horcruxes too? That's what I'm getting from their rants. If ANYTHING, Hermione, Fleur, and everyone else is being selfish by putting more burden of Harry. And I've never thought this before of Sirius, but his attitude towards Harry... well he can go f*ck himself lol. Totally out of line from the absent godfather there.
They all continually harp on Harry going "alone" but literally none of them can argue that they could've gone unless they wanted to become horcruxes too? That's what I'm getting from their rants. If ANYTHING, Hermione, Fleur, and everyone else is being selfish by putting more burden of Harry. And I've never thought this before of Sirius, but his attitude towards Harry... well he can go f*ck himself lol. Totally out of line from the absent godfather there.