for Heart and Soul5/27/2024 c32 pincho
The end of the chapter was good the scene between Ron and Hermione that is and it looks like finally things will start moving. The rest so far the story should be related as Angst and romance instead of Drama. No real drama is occurring just random light teen angst. Drama would be if Harry confronted people and laid down is non appreciation for secrets.
The end of the chapter was good the scene between Ron and Hermione that is and it looks like finally things will start moving. The rest so far the story should be related as Angst and romance instead of Drama. No real drama is occurring just random light teen angst. Drama would be if Harry confronted people and laid down is non appreciation for secrets.
5/29/2024 c80 cdmartinez
Probably the longest fic I've ever read but we'll worth it! Very interesting and entertaining read.
Probably the longest fic I've ever read but we'll worth it! Very interesting and entertaining read.
5/27/2024 c31 pincho
I am a little surprised but not completely that so much time was wasted on religion than preparing Harry for his debut. No high societal instruction, no do's and don'ts, but then again it wasted a lot of time on Sirius and his recovery, yet ignores the fact that Harry was malnourished and stunted in growth.
Yes the story changed his emotional abuse to just being ignored and free slave labor, but nothing else and yet no care has been given other than "he has a family now" which will fix everything. It's just a huge miss.
I am a little surprised but not completely that so much time was wasted on religion than preparing Harry for his debut. No high societal instruction, no do's and don'ts, but then again it wasted a lot of time on Sirius and his recovery, yet ignores the fact that Harry was malnourished and stunted in growth.
Yes the story changed his emotional abuse to just being ignored and free slave labor, but nothing else and yet no care has been given other than "he has a family now" which will fix everything. It's just a huge miss.
5/27/2024 c46 G Fawkes
Oh. Forgot this is from ten years ago. Nevermind.
Oh. Forgot this is from ten years ago. Nevermind.
5/27/2024 c46 G Fawkes
Malfoy and his closest compatriots got up and left the Great Hall.
Then Harry and his friends (Gryffindors) got up and left, also.
Why would Daphne and Tracey be out in the hall, NOT being part of Malfoy group, and surely not following him?
If you want the 'good' Slytherins out in the hallway, you kind of need to address that they got up and exited when they see Harry and his group go.
Malfoy and his closest compatriots got up and left the Great Hall.
Then Harry and his friends (Gryffindors) got up and left, also.
Why would Daphne and Tracey be out in the hall, NOT being part of Malfoy group, and surely not following him?
If you want the 'good' Slytherins out in the hallway, you kind of need to address that they got up and exited when they see Harry and his group go.
5/29/2024 c24 Soul Sendant
ah dumbest door is so fucking pathetic i cant wait to cheer for the death he deserves just as much as voldemort and his cronies
ah dumbest door is so fucking pathetic i cant wait to cheer for the death he deserves just as much as voldemort and his cronies
5/29/2024 c23 Soul Sendant
skip skip the dumbest door faggot nonsense as trash characters are a waste of time to read especially when written by low IQ teens.
skip skip the dumbest door faggot nonsense as trash characters are a waste of time to read especially when written by low IQ teens.
5/29/2024 c22 Soul Sendant
second chances lmao malfoy and the rest are past second chances this slave minded trash is so very pathetic
second chances lmao malfoy and the rest are past second chances this slave minded trash is so very pathetic
5/28/2024 c19 Soul Sendant
As seriously as the purebloods take things, umbridge would never be able to become a teacher who sabotaged the childrens learning the ridiculous nonsense is something fan fiction should fix not propagate it but I guess intelligence and common sense are both non existent in fan fics.
As seriously as the purebloods take things, umbridge would never be able to become a teacher who sabotaged the childrens learning the ridiculous nonsense is something fan fiction should fix not propagate it but I guess intelligence and common sense are both non existent in fan fics.
5/27/2024 c18 Soul Sendant
wow the denial is ridiculous they are brow beating harry into what they want he is just a pathetic simpy bitch
wow the denial is ridiculous they are brow beating harry into what they want he is just a pathetic simpy bitch
5/27/2024 c18 Soul Sendant
another instance where harry expresses that he doesnt want to do something and other people dont let it go he does what they want its very pathetic you gotta kick these people who pretend to care to the curb
another instance where harry expresses that he doesnt want to do something and other people dont let it go he does what they want its very pathetic you gotta kick these people who pretend to care to the curb
5/27/2024 c17 Soul Sendant
mind raping student yes thats exactly how good people or those of the light would do things yes just like those of the dark would but its ok because of fake ass greater good bullshit
mind raping student yes thats exactly how good people or those of the light would do things yes just like those of the dark would but its ok because of fake ass greater good bullshit