for Harry Potter: Reflections of reality2/23/2010 c3 
1VFR6
I'm barely the person qualify to criticize a fanfic.
But in this chapter, there's some grammatical errors.
Ok, now that the bad stuff out of the way, let get to the plot review! =D
Ares Evan? The ARES? Of Greek Pantheon?
The one that Romans called Mars?
And why is Voldermort can find Harry?
Is this a one shot chapter?
Why am I asking questions instead of reviewing?
1VFR6I'm barely the person qualify to criticize a fanfic.
But in this chapter, there's some grammatical errors.
Ok, now that the bad stuff out of the way, let get to the plot review! =D
Ares Evan? The ARES? Of Greek Pantheon?
The one that Romans called Mars?
And why is Voldermort can find Harry?
Is this a one shot chapter?
Why am I asking questions instead of reviewing?
2/2/2010 c1 Melora
For further writing, you may be interested in this site:
http:/ w w w . sapientimagic . com (without the spaces)
It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.
Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.
Melora Brockert, SUM student
For further writing, you may be interested in this site:
http:/ w w w . sapientimagic . com (without the spaces)
It's a role playing site based on the Harry Potter world.
Either way, good luck with your writing and I look forward to reading more.
Melora Brockert, SUM student
1/22/2010 c1 kzinti7
Wow, would have loved to seen where this would have gone. I agree with angelic fire8 in their review. hope to see more of your work.
Wow, would have loved to seen where this would have gone. I agree with angelic fire8 in their review. hope to see more of your work.
1/22/2010 c1 Angelic Fire8
Very interesting plotline... Shame it would never become a full story. I'd really like to see who was pretending to be Dumbledore and the purpose of the undercover agents. You could probably put up challenges on your profile so other authors might be able to use your ideas and create a story with your guidelines. Of course, that itself would be hard cuz some might not continue. Oh well...
Hope to see more of your plot bunnies and potential ideas. :D :P
Very interesting plotline... Shame it would never become a full story. I'd really like to see who was pretending to be Dumbledore and the purpose of the undercover agents. You could probably put up challenges on your profile so other authors might be able to use your ideas and create a story with your guidelines. Of course, that itself would be hard cuz some might not continue. Oh well...
Hope to see more of your plot bunnies and potential ideas. :D :P