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7/7/2010 c8 amy brookes
this is for the whole story i think its really good my eyes are hurting coz i got so into it i hope this goes into a film coz i would pay big money to see it
6/27/2010 c1 Guest
wow amazing lmfao great
2/23/2010 c8 2Rachii P
wow Esme ,

i luv this chapter.

the beginin is sad n i rly feel 4 u avein tp write it.

but i'm glad everythin turns out well in the end tho

i luv the song n its a rly gd idea
2/13/2010 c7 Rach
kwl chapter Jess

thanx 4 puttin in wat u did about me xD

n aaww i cn't beileve he's dead :(:(
2/10/2010 c7 2kiavampiress01
pleas pleas i beg you add more chapters pleas pleas pleas pleas pleas update soon!
1/31/2010 c5 Rach
wow this i skwl jess.

i luv the romance in it the lads am so sweet xD

Jakes a bit strict but its kwl how he will do anythin for Tony
1/30/2010 c4 Rach
hey jess this is so kwl - i luv the idea u've got for the story , its very gd. its a gd story too. ly x
1/25/2010 c1 STEPHEN CLARKSON
HI STEPHEN CLARKSON HERE I LIKE THE BIT WHENIT END AND I DISLIKE THE BIT WHEN IT STARTS LOL YO OK x

NO RELLY IT WAS REALY GOOD YOU SHOULD BE AN AUTHER
1/24/2010 c2 5Airri Spree
Nice Story. Hope that you are going to continue and update soon. Good Luck!
1/23/2010 c1 Tee
That was very interesting and cute :)
1/23/2010 c1 4starsinhereyes93
you're not gonna attract anyone in with that Summary.

I think you need to edit it..
1/22/2010 c1 1MsHannawolf
Ok this is good and bad because you have a great plot but you need to space out your chapters more else it's just one big block and big words are evil.

You also need to stop writing in a block font because it messes with my eyes sight and confuses me.

Anyway grat story keep writing because your on your way and thanks for helping in my stories

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