for The secret baby7/7/2010 c8 amy brookes
this is for the whole story i think its really good my eyes are hurting coz i got so into it i hope this goes into a film coz i would pay big money to see it
this is for the whole story i think its really good my eyes are hurting coz i got so into it i hope this goes into a film coz i would pay big money to see it
6/27/2010 c1 Guest
wow amazing lmfao great
wow amazing lmfao great
2/23/2010 c8 
2Rachii P
wow Esme ,
i luv this chapter.
the beginin is sad n i rly feel 4 u avein tp write it.
but i'm glad everythin turns out well in the end tho
i luv the song n its a rly gd idea
2Rachii Pwow Esme ,
i luv this chapter.
the beginin is sad n i rly feel 4 u avein tp write it.
but i'm glad everythin turns out well in the end tho
i luv the song n its a rly gd idea
2/13/2010 c7 Rach
kwl chapter Jess
thanx 4 puttin in wat u did about me xD
n aaww i cn't beileve he's dead :(:(
kwl chapter Jess
thanx 4 puttin in wat u did about me xD
n aaww i cn't beileve he's dead :(:(
2/10/2010 c7 2kiavampiress01
pleas pleas i beg you add more chapters pleas pleas pleas pleas pleas update soon!
2kiavampiress01pleas pleas i beg you add more chapters pleas pleas pleas pleas pleas update soon!
1/31/2010 c5 Rach
wow this i skwl jess.
i luv the romance in it the lads am so sweet xD
Jakes a bit strict but its kwl how he will do anythin for Tony
wow this i skwl jess.
i luv the romance in it the lads am so sweet xD
Jakes a bit strict but its kwl how he will do anythin for Tony
1/30/2010 c4 Rach
hey jess this is so kwl - i luv the idea u've got for the story , its very gd. its a gd story too. ly x
hey jess this is so kwl - i luv the idea u've got for the story , its very gd. its a gd story too. ly x
1/25/2010 c1 STEPHEN CLARKSON
HI STEPHEN CLARKSON HERE I LIKE THE BIT WHENIT END AND I DISLIKE THE BIT WHEN IT STARTS LOL YO OK x
NO RELLY IT WAS REALY GOOD YOU SHOULD BE AN AUTHER
HI STEPHEN CLARKSON HERE I LIKE THE BIT WHENIT END AND I DISLIKE THE BIT WHEN IT STARTS LOL YO OK x
NO RELLY IT WAS REALY GOOD YOU SHOULD BE AN AUTHER
1/24/2010 c2 5Airri Spree
Nice Story. Hope that you are going to continue and update soon. Good Luck!
5Airri SpreeNice Story. Hope that you are going to continue and update soon. Good Luck!
1/23/2010 c1 Tee
That was very interesting and cute :)
That was very interesting and cute :)
1/23/2010 c1 4starsinhereyes93
you're not gonna attract anyone in with that Summary.
I think you need to edit it..
4starsinhereyes93you're not gonna attract anyone in with that Summary.
I think you need to edit it..
1/22/2010 c1 1MsHannawolf
Ok this is good and bad because you have a great plot but you need to space out your chapters more else it's just one big block and big words are evil.
You also need to stop writing in a block font because it messes with my eyes sight and confuses me.
Anyway grat story keep writing because your on your way and thanks for helping in my stories
1MsHannawolfOk this is good and bad because you have a great plot but you need to space out your chapters more else it's just one big block and big words are evil.
You also need to stop writing in a block font because it messes with my eyes sight and confuses me.
Anyway grat story keep writing because your on your way and thanks for helping in my stories