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12/2/2018 c3 1Fandomsforinfinity
Alessa,
I’m so sorry. No child deserves a life like that. Your mother should know that. She should really be able to understand. I don’t understand why she would leave you like this, but she must love you. She loves you. But I understand if you don’t feel that it’s true. I understand if you hate her and never want to see her again. I’m sorry, Alessa. I love you. (Did I just write a letter to your oc? Possibly)
5/14/2018 c1 Rona Lisa Howard
Olive left because she couldn't handle the name Corn SchwartzandgrubenierreandConeybear
3/8/2014 c3 Guest
This story is amazing and so sad. PLEASE DON'T LEAVE THIS STORY LIKE THIS! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS
11/13/2013 c3 Broadway Evanescence
Noooo! Poor alessa
7/26/2013 c3 Leaving and Left
... Aw...

But Olive wouldn't do that. She wouldn't. She knows how it feels... :(

Sad. I love OliveXBarfee
7/20/2011 c1 1JayJay96
This whole fic, all three chapters, is amazing. Great job. Please continue, if you were planning on/thinking about it.
11/5/2010 c3 10Kool Broadway Reader
AW! This is so sad! D: I love the romance between Barfee and Olive in general. But I hope you update this soon! :D
7/31/2010 c3 2Azura Rey
I'm looking forward to seeing how you justify Olive. This is pretty out of character for her. I like reading about Alessa, though.
5/23/2010 c3 34Beth Rose Harker
Good story! It's an interesting take on what might have happened post spelling bee. Alessa has a very strong, vibrant, and interesting voice. You really made me believe in her as a character.
5/3/2010 c3 4Centerville's Very Own Latvia
How sad. As morose as this story is, the descrpition and energy woven into the writing is outstanding. I want to cry, but at the same time I want to laugh. You are an amazing author and I hope you shall update this wonderful piece of work.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

~Lex
5/3/2010 c2 Centerville's Very Own Latvia
I am again in awe at the outstanding quality of this story. In letters which only includes text, no description you can show the characters feelings and emotions wonderfully. Bravo. No. Brava! I am moving on to the next chapter. :)
5/3/2010 c1 Centerville's Very Own Latvia
How beautiful. Out of just a short play you can pin the characteristics of two characters and successfully intertwine them into one character, their kid. How amazing. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter.
3/21/2010 c3 almond lychee
remarkably well written...poignant and sentimental - just what I'd imagine any daughter of Olive and William would be. Please let Olive redeem herself somewhat in the coming chapters?
3/20/2010 c3 HermioneLennon
It broke my heart.
3/19/2010 c2 HermioneLennon
It's so depressing! :( And that's what makes it good!
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