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Good fic
Good fic
11/30/2010 c1 
5stone in focus
You write both BioWare and Castle fanfiction? So awesome. And although I do agree that it would've been nice to see more of Castle's POV, you really nailed Beckett's character. I didn't think it was possible to love her more than I already do, but this fic did it.
The only thing I'm not so keen on is the frequency of the italics. In certain places, it felt like maybe you didn't trust your wordsmithing and thus used italics to get the point across, but the emotion was already readily apparent (have faith in your writing!). Of course, it could be more of a personal preference thing. :) Looking forward to seeing more from you!
5stone in focusYou write both BioWare and Castle fanfiction? So awesome. And although I do agree that it would've been nice to see more of Castle's POV, you really nailed Beckett's character. I didn't think it was possible to love her more than I already do, but this fic did it.
The only thing I'm not so keen on is the frequency of the italics. In certain places, it felt like maybe you didn't trust your wordsmithing and thus used italics to get the point across, but the emotion was already readily apparent (have faith in your writing!). Of course, it could be more of a personal preference thing. :) Looking forward to seeing more from you!
4/25/2010 c1 4A.Deep.Life
Wonderful story! :) Your writing is really great, you did a great job of keeping everyone in-character, and I loved the whole concept behind the story. One of the things that I love about Castle is the character progression that you can see throughout the episodes, and taking 5 moments from different points in the series to really delve into Beckett's mind was a fantastic idea. And I also really liked the summary you wrote for it...definitely pulled me in and it was short & sweet.
If I can be just a little bit picky on one point, I would say to watch your use of italics. Some of the italicized words were perfectly placed to add just the right emphasis, but there were also so many of them that by the end of the story I found their overall effect to be slightly lessened. You seem to have a knack for knowing where to emphasize but I would just try to emphasize a little bit less, so that the italics you do use are more powerful. If that makes sense ;)
4A.Deep.LifeWonderful story! :) Your writing is really great, you did a great job of keeping everyone in-character, and I loved the whole concept behind the story. One of the things that I love about Castle is the character progression that you can see throughout the episodes, and taking 5 moments from different points in the series to really delve into Beckett's mind was a fantastic idea. And I also really liked the summary you wrote for it...definitely pulled me in and it was short & sweet.
If I can be just a little bit picky on one point, I would say to watch your use of italics. Some of the italicized words were perfectly placed to add just the right emphasis, but there were also so many of them that by the end of the story I found their overall effect to be slightly lessened. You seem to have a knack for knowing where to emphasize but I would just try to emphasize a little bit less, so that the italics you do use are more powerful. If that makes sense ;)
3/14/2010 c1 25smut1956
Not a slam on your age but a compliment, very mature and polished for one so young. Nice story - well paced and true to canon.
T.
25smut1956Not a slam on your age but a compliment, very mature and polished for one so young. Nice story - well paced and true to canon.
T.
2/12/2010 c1 dancinut1080
So I was reading your story, thinking wow this is a great piece. Taking key snippets from the show and delving into Kate's mindset during each one. Then when I read your a/n I realize how young you are to be writing a piece with this much depth and maturity I was blown away. This type of depth is not usually seen in writing for someone your age. You definitly have a talent for writing and I just want to encourage you to keep pursuing it. I loved this piece and look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
~dancinut
So I was reading your story, thinking wow this is a great piece. Taking key snippets from the show and delving into Kate's mindset during each one. Then when I read your a/n I realize how young you are to be writing a piece with this much depth and maturity I was blown away. This type of depth is not usually seen in writing for someone your age. You definitly have a talent for writing and I just want to encourage you to keep pursuing it. I loved this piece and look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
~dancinut
1/25/2010 c1 NCIS'LA
To tell the truth, it was good, you are a good writer, but I didn't like it. I thought there wasn't enough of Castle and Beckett in it. You only went on about what she was thinking and I lost interest at the start. But you are a very good writer, and please don't think that what I said was meant to be mean or anything. Good job. Other than the other bit, it was pretty excellent. :)
To tell the truth, it was good, you are a good writer, but I didn't like it. I thought there wasn't enough of Castle and Beckett in it. You only went on about what she was thinking and I lost interest at the start. But you are a very good writer, and please don't think that what I said was meant to be mean or anything. Good job. Other than the other bit, it was pretty excellent. :)
1/25/2010 c1 2Maplefrost-232
Wow, absolutely amazing sis! You bring it yet again! Now quit griping at me for not reading it yet!
2Maplefrost-232Wow, absolutely amazing sis! You bring it yet again! Now quit griping at me for not reading it yet!
1/25/2010 c1 64SignedSealedWritten
This story is all sorts of amazing. I love the way that you portrayed them. You're a talented writer.
64SignedSealedWrittenThis story is all sorts of amazing. I love the way that you portrayed them. You're a talented writer.
1/24/2010 c1 gracie127
wow, this is awesome. You've got Kate Beckett smack on and I hope that's the correct term to use as english isn't my mother tongue.
Don't take this the wrong way but I have a hard time believing that you're only 16. This story speaks of a maturity that's way beyond 16. I only have to look at how you have her deal with the 'it's about your mother'. That is something I would've loved to have seen being acted out and frankly I think the powers that be (meaning ABC) did loose an opportunity to give that episode an even more poignant ending as Stana Katic definitely could've pulled it off.
I can't wait to see what you'll come up with when dealing with Cal Lightman and Gillian Foster of Lie to me, next to 'Castle' one of my favorite shows. Keep up the good work. I just wish I could write like that, I'm truly envious.
wow, this is awesome. You've got Kate Beckett smack on and I hope that's the correct term to use as english isn't my mother tongue.
Don't take this the wrong way but I have a hard time believing that you're only 16. This story speaks of a maturity that's way beyond 16. I only have to look at how you have her deal with the 'it's about your mother'. That is something I would've loved to have seen being acted out and frankly I think the powers that be (meaning ABC) did loose an opportunity to give that episode an even more poignant ending as Stana Katic definitely could've pulled it off.
I can't wait to see what you'll come up with when dealing with Cal Lightman and Gillian Foster of Lie to me, next to 'Castle' one of my favorite shows. Keep up the good work. I just wish I could write like that, I'm truly envious.
1/24/2010 c1 13Nvrmore
Awesome!
Truly. I think you did a great job getting into the character's head and portraying both Beckett and Castle quite well. Her thoughts make complete sense for the situations. And, again, I'm so very impressed with your grasp of human emotion and motivation!
Nicely done.
And thanks for the distraction. ;) I now return to pining (and counting the hours to the midnight sale - yeah. you know what I mean!).
One day when you've published your first original work, you'll have to let us know your name so we (your fans) can buy the book. :D
13NvrmoreAwesome!
Truly. I think you did a great job getting into the character's head and portraying both Beckett and Castle quite well. Her thoughts make complete sense for the situations. And, again, I'm so very impressed with your grasp of human emotion and motivation!
Nicely done.
And thanks for the distraction. ;) I now return to pining (and counting the hours to the midnight sale - yeah. you know what I mean!).
One day when you've published your first original work, you'll have to let us know your name so we (your fans) can buy the book. :D
1/23/2010 c1 51underarrest39
that was great. i finally saw Sucker Punch on internet today and now have seen it twice! yay! thanks for sharing.
51underarrest39that was great. i finally saw Sucker Punch on internet today and now have seen it twice! yay! thanks for sharing.
1/23/2010 c1 I'm Widget
You're only 16? Wow. You're a very good writer. I'm so impressed. Love this story. Will there be more?
You're only 16? Wow. You're a very good writer. I'm so impressed. Love this story. Will there be more?