for My Vixen11/12/2020 c9 Guest
Hmmm, your work needs to be edited
Hmmm, your work needs to be edited
11/17/2014 c9 mirian
actualiza pronto llevas años
actualiza pronto llevas años
6/13/2014 c9 mirian
por favor continua te lo pido me esta gustando mucho
por favor continua te lo pido me esta gustando mucho
4/13/2014 c2 
1Ruby Calendula
Actually it takes many weeks or possibly month/s to know that your pregnant...unless the ninja medical system upgraded this and not to mention this is Tsunade were talking about...just saying though.
1Ruby CalendulaActually it takes many weeks or possibly month/s to know that your pregnant...unless the ninja medical system upgraded this and not to mention this is Tsunade were talking about...just saying though.
9/11/2013 c9 thelastunicorn
i love this story. it is really good and a little funny i feel bad for the guys on this story. i can't wait for the next chapters to come out soon.
i love this story. it is really good and a little funny i feel bad for the guys on this story. i can't wait for the next chapters to come out soon.
4/17/2012 c2 dizzydani777
or Kyuubi messing around is about the only other way U could find out your pregnant in a day! good work.
or Kyuubi messing around is about the only other way U could find out your pregnant in a day! good work.
9/18/2011 c9 narutogirl103
itachi is sooo sweet! sasuke is a bastard and loving the story update soonn!
itachi is sooo sweet! sasuke is a bastard and loving the story update soonn!
5/14/2011 c1 4Tempest S
I have to question if Sasuke would ever break into Konoha just to rape Narue. It's stupid, foolish and beyond arrogant even for him. Not to mention, that was ALL he did? Why didn't he just rape her when she was away from all her friends and other loyal Leaf shinobi and would have far less of a risk of getting caught? He's not dumb, arrogant enough to make you want to kick him down a hill and watch him bounce and roll the whole way down but not dumb.
4Tempest SI have to question if Sasuke would ever break into Konoha just to rape Narue. It's stupid, foolish and beyond arrogant even for him. Not to mention, that was ALL he did? Why didn't he just rape her when she was away from all her friends and other loyal Leaf shinobi and would have far less of a risk of getting caught? He's not dumb, arrogant enough to make you want to kick him down a hill and watch him bounce and roll the whole way down but not dumb.
4/17/2011 c1 37dragonzap93
I don't see a problem with this story at all.Very well written and a good story.
37dragonzap93I don't see a problem with this story at all.Very well written and a good story.
4/7/2011 c9 saya420
great chapter and im really looking forward t the next chapter to come out, so until then ja ne
great chapter and im really looking forward t the next chapter to come out, so until then ja ne