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203BubblyShell22
I really liked this and can see Lena comforting Bee like that. Yeah, I think the girls are close to each other in different ways like with Lena and Bee in this instance. Nicely done on this.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
203BubblyShell22I really liked this and can see Lena comforting Bee like that. Yeah, I think the girls are close to each other in different ways like with Lena and Bee in this instance. Nicely done on this.
The Bubbly One,
Shell
12/21/2010 c1 127Lavenderangel
This was really sweet. I like stories that highlight the individual friendships between the girls, particularly Bridget/Lena. The story felt a little fragmented, but the interaction made me smile.
127LavenderangelThis was really sweet. I like stories that highlight the individual friendships between the girls, particularly Bridget/Lena. The story felt a little fragmented, but the interaction made me smile.
3/30/2010 c1 24Adoxagraphy.Angelus
This is really good. I like it. Your writing has great structure and lets us know things that are important straight on. Great job.
24Adoxagraphy.AngelusThis is really good. I like it. Your writing has great structure and lets us know things that are important straight on. Great job.
2/4/2010 c1 ToughDramaHunny
This was really well written. Finally, someone who notices that it's Bridget and Lena that are closer, then Carmen and Tibby. Keep up the great writing :P -TDH
This was really well written. Finally, someone who notices that it's Bridget and Lena that are closer, then Carmen and Tibby. Keep up the great writing :P -TDH
1/28/2010 c1 fdsgdfgsdf
Very great oneshot you have here. You portrayed emotions, characters, and bonds very well. I enjoy the friendship between Lena and Bridget and this fiction is a perfect example! Very well written!
Very great oneshot you have here. You portrayed emotions, characters, and bonds very well. I enjoy the friendship between Lena and Bridget and this fiction is a perfect example! Very well written!
1/26/2010 c1 8Kan-Can
I love it, Ash. It's really great. Wow, I gave you part of the inspiration... that's just awesome. Now I can't wait until we go back to school so that I can discuss this with you. Whoever you are right now... (Lily, Riley, Rikki, Sapphire, etc. ?)
8Kan-CanI love it, Ash. It's really great. Wow, I gave you part of the inspiration... that's just awesome. Now I can't wait until we go back to school so that I can discuss this with you. Whoever you are right now... (Lily, Riley, Rikki, Sapphire, etc. ?)
1/25/2010 c1 anonymous2010
This is a great story! I think you really got your writing style but also had a little bit of Ann Brashaers' too. I think this was really good. I think you should write some more stories about Bridget. maybe one about her and Eric... hint hint... cause I luv those.
This is a great story! I think you really got your writing style but also had a little bit of Ann Brashaers' too. I think this was really good. I think you should write some more stories about Bridget. maybe one about her and Eric... hint hint... cause I luv those.