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9/14/2013 c1 15HerosReprise
this is beautiful.
I actually picture his mother to be very similar to how you have made her.
'18 years and he still loved him, still missed him.' I'm confused about this part, who is this about? Is it Goku's death? Because thats what I read it as, which I think is very fitting. but im not sure now.
Loved how well it fitted the song I'll look into your continuation fic.
10/6/2012 c1 vegetajacoballdai
awww poor vegeta

but great fic
7/5/2011 c1 2cara9001
aw that was so sad but i loved it it made me cry
4/4/2011 c1 2Krissilla
oh! it wasn't a spelling mistake! I just read it wrong xD sorry about that :)

I liked this story, it made me want to know more about Vegeta :D I'd say please continue, but you already have ^^
8/4/2010 c1 8Sincerely C
Definetely... Hard to describe. It was a great story, and it was amazing how it portrayed sadness and in very small amounts it was cute how he sucked on his tail. The whole thing where he tried to save his mother was both sad and cute. Nicely written.
1/30/2010 c1 5FanficMogul
Well nice, but would have been better chronologically. Heh. Good.
1/28/2010 c1 2bldydrkangl
This was a really good story. I like the lyrics that you put in the middle of the story to help move it along yet break it up at the same time. Really good job.
1/28/2010 c1 101Saber Wing
This song fits Vegeta so well, especially the way you have written it. I never realized it before, but it really does. I like your take on the things that went on in Vegeta's life. Well written, and unique. Great fic ^_^
1/28/2010 c1 The Gizzard
Interesting new take on an aspect of Vegeta's life not to often seen. It could benefit from another round of editing just to clean up the grammar a little. But its cute. I can definitely see a baby saiyan sucking on their tail though. That was a nice touch.

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