for Pools of Sorrow, Waves of Joy12/26/2010 c1 
2Dancing Irish Girl
Awh this was so sweet! I just love Harry and Ginny, they are the perfect couple! It is really well written and realistic too because even though he had finally beaten Voldemort, Harry still had to mourn Fred, Tonks, Lupin, Colin etc.
I really liked this. And thanks again for reviewing A Very Weasley Christmas :)
-Phoenix *
2Dancing Irish GirlAwh this was so sweet! I just love Harry and Ginny, they are the perfect couple! It is really well written and realistic too because even though he had finally beaten Voldemort, Harry still had to mourn Fred, Tonks, Lupin, Colin etc.
I really liked this. And thanks again for reviewing A Very Weasley Christmas :)
-Phoenix *
3/25/2010 c1 6Miss Basset
Hola!
I think I saw this when I was bored and looked through Harry Potter fanfics. Pretty good for a first one. And I'm not just saying that cuz your mi amigo.
I also think that it would be good to cut your paragraph into smaller ones. It makes reading a fanfic so much easier.
And Voldemort es un tanto burrito!
-Basset
(P.S. your private message thingy is disabled, so I can't reply to you)
6Miss BassetHola!
I think I saw this when I was bored and looked through Harry Potter fanfics. Pretty good for a first one. And I'm not just saying that cuz your mi amigo.
I also think that it would be good to cut your paragraph into smaller ones. It makes reading a fanfic so much easier.
And Voldemort es un tanto burrito!
-Basset
(P.S. your private message thingy is disabled, so I can't reply to you)
1/29/2010 c1 7q.thews
Plausible and realistic too.
Ciao!
P.S.
I agree with the previous reviewer about the formatting.
7q.thewsPlausible and realistic too.
Ciao!
P.S.
I agree with the previous reviewer about the formatting.
1/28/2010 c1 4Siriuseverus
This is great and I loved the idea, but I have a suggestion. Could you maybe make smaller paragraphs? You may not have veiwed it on the site yet, but try to. One large block is harder on the eyes and harder to focus on. Congrats on your first fanfic!
4SiriuseverusThis is great and I loved the idea, but I have a suggestion. Could you maybe make smaller paragraphs? You may not have veiwed it on the site yet, but try to. One large block is harder on the eyes and harder to focus on. Congrats on your first fanfic!