for Causality2/15/2019 c1 WheelofPain
Let it be said that this delightful interlude of loving sex between those two was absolutely wonderful, and that if you ever find the inspiration and the time to write the sequel you mentioned in the author's notes, I will be the first to read (devour) it. I'm still in awe of how wonderfully written and emotional The Gap Between is, and I want to thank you again for writing it. You've really inspired me, and I feel like writing you a little something in return, as a thank you (which you are entirely free not to read, of course). I'm just very, very appreciate of the time you took to write this story, and the magnificence of your narrative and character exploration! Love,
Sparcina
Let it be said that this delightful interlude of loving sex between those two was absolutely wonderful, and that if you ever find the inspiration and the time to write the sequel you mentioned in the author's notes, I will be the first to read (devour) it. I'm still in awe of how wonderfully written and emotional The Gap Between is, and I want to thank you again for writing it. You've really inspired me, and I feel like writing you a little something in return, as a thank you (which you are entirely free not to read, of course). I'm just very, very appreciate of the time you took to write this story, and the magnificence of your narrative and character exploration! Love,
Sparcina
9/2/2015 c1 
7tanseynz
If everyone's first time was like that, with a partner as much into love and care as Bones was, we'd have such a cherished society. This was written so beautifully and emotively it brought tears to my eyes.
7tanseynzIf everyone's first time was like that, with a partner as much into love and care as Bones was, we'd have such a cherished society. This was written so beautifully and emotively it brought tears to my eyes.
7/7/2014 c1 Lzrdgirl22
Ahh that was stupidly hot and sweet at the same time! You have an amazing way of writing this pairing with just the right balance. I really really hope you do an official sequel cos I just can't get enough of these two!
Ahh that was stupidly hot and sweet at the same time! You have an amazing way of writing this pairing with just the right balance. I really really hope you do an official sequel cos I just can't get enough of these two!
6/25/2014 c1 11Painting Politics and Poland
I love how you write Pavel! I normally hate things written in his POV but I think you did a great job capturing his character.
11Painting Politics and PolandI love how you write Pavel! I normally hate things written in his POV but I think you did a great job capturing his character.
12/7/2013 c1 iggle731
This was a really good follow up. I especially like how it was done from Pav's view instead of Len's. Really good job
This was a really good follow up. I especially like how it was done from Pav's view instead of Len's. Really good job
8/21/2013 c1 Mehe
Whenever McCoy compliments Checkov my stomach errupts into butterflies. This is so adorable and lovely and cute and beautiful and I just... GAH. Please make another one! The Gap Between and this one is just so pefect I can't handle it anymore! c:
Whenever McCoy compliments Checkov my stomach errupts into butterflies. This is so adorable and lovely and cute and beautiful and I just... GAH. Please make another one! The Gap Between and this one is just so pefect I can't handle it anymore! c:
6/26/2013 c1 12AgentAva
Every time Bones called him baby...ohmygod it was like my heart melted into my body a little bit.
I loved the writing and how you managed to balance the steamy parts with the emotional aspect of their relationship. Fantastic job!
12AgentAvaEvery time Bones called him baby...ohmygod it was like my heart melted into my body a little bit.
I loved the writing and how you managed to balance the steamy parts with the emotional aspect of their relationship. Fantastic job!
6/19/2013 c1 9xXthenextbookwormXx
The only major complaint I have here, is that I don't speak Russian, and neither does Google Translate, if it's not in the Cyrillic alphabet. Is it possible to get translations kicking around, like a note or something at the end of the story? Because I want to know what he's saying, here and in The Gap Between too. That would be really nice, thanks!
9xXthenextbookwormXxThe only major complaint I have here, is that I don't speak Russian, and neither does Google Translate, if it's not in the Cyrillic alphabet. Is it possible to get translations kicking around, like a note or something at the end of the story? Because I want to know what he's saying, here and in The Gap Between too. That would be really nice, thanks!
6/1/2013 c1 Crossed by the Stars
*screaming*
I am literally dying because holy SHIT I just can't even- you just- and they-
*passes out*
*screaming*
I am literally dying because holy SHIT I just can't even- you just- and they-
*passes out*
6/1/2013 c1 10Tani May Trybrand
Of course this was sweet, but also I love all the science stuff you put in here! It was supper fantastic. I love the theories associated with black holes and thermodynamics.
10Tani May TrybrandOf course this was sweet, but also I love all the science stuff you put in here! It was supper fantastic. I love the theories associated with black holes and thermodynamics.
11/12/2012 c1 Guest
wow, amazing story
wow, amazing story