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3/29/2010 c1 19orangepumpkins
ah, yoshino is probably one of the best characters in naruto.

great story.
3/25/2010 c1 B. Wynter
Nicely done.

I may have spotted a grammatical error or two, but it's nothing incredibly noticeable. (Nor does it reflect poorly on your skills as a writer.)

I remember the joke (though you call it an e-mail story) that you based this off of. Nicely executed. You've turned it into a really good story.

Keep up the good work, I hope to read more from you!

Happy Writing,

Karasu
2/7/2010 c1 13w.i.t.c.h fan in ut
So funny and adorable. Yoshino is a clever one. Shikamaru must of picked up a few things from her. Great job!
2/1/2010 c1 13makoshark
Great Story! I really enjoyed reading it. I can definitely see Shikamaru's mom doing somthing like that.
1/29/2010 c1 GUYFawke
great story, although I don't know why but this plot seemed familiar to me. Did you were inspired by someone else fanfiction?

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