for Annoying Leafs and Aggitating Clouds DELAYED8/26/2017 c1 Ms. Peppermint
Naruto x Karui is so~ good! It sucks that there aren't many fanfictions with them :( Please update! I really love your story so far 3
Naruto x Karui is so~ good! It sucks that there aren't many fanfictions with them :( Please update! I really love your story so far 3
5/23/2016 c1 Guest
This so shitty and disgusting. Fuck naruto.
This so shitty and disgusting. Fuck naruto.
9/10/2015 c1 
5Talonsen
Bro… WHY DID YOU NOT CONTINUE THIS! I mean really, this is pure GOLD! After all the shitty NarutoxKuari stories I've encountered, to finally finds a good one… AND IT'S ONLY ONE CHAPTER!?
Please continue this. This is the humble request of (I hope you also consider me) a friend. I'm still wondering what Kishimoto was smoking when he thought up most of the canon Naruto pairings. ChojixKuari, WTF.
5TalonsenBro… WHY DID YOU NOT CONTINUE THIS! I mean really, this is pure GOLD! After all the shitty NarutoxKuari stories I've encountered, to finally finds a good one… AND IT'S ONLY ONE CHAPTER!?
Please continue this. This is the humble request of (I hope you also consider me) a friend. I'm still wondering what Kishimoto was smoking when he thought up most of the canon Naruto pairings. ChojixKuari, WTF.
6/9/2014 c1 Guest
update soon :D
update soon :D
9/19/2012 c1 Child of zelretch
this story is realy interesting. I want to see what happens next, but it seems you have abandoned it. :(
please either update or put it up for adoption!
this story is realy interesting. I want to see what happens next, but it seems you have abandoned it. :(
please either update or put it up for adoption!
7/20/2012 c1 1Andromeda09
Aaaaah, how can you just walk away from such a promising story...at least it looks like you did. I dig the beginning, that was a nice twist to the original...lol, and poor Kakashi *drools from being in love*...please update ;)
1Andromeda09Aaaaah, how can you just walk away from such a promising story...at least it looks like you did. I dig the beginning, that was a nice twist to the original...lol, and poor Kakashi *drools from being in love*...please update ;)
3/3/2011 c1 NamikazeNaruto6hokage
is Xorncon - Number 0 's story that good? well, yea it is. but you're the second person that's ripped it off
is Xorncon - Number 0 's story that good? well, yea it is. but you're the second person that's ripped it off