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7/9/2021 c1 Guest
This is boring.
2/27/2010 c1 hidden Drow
some friend i am... im sorry i hadnt reveiwd your stuff yet until now. I like it, its dark and sad at the same time, you used descriptive and detailed language, however some words can be replaced with stronger words. but i like it, keep up the good work.
1/31/2010 c1 5GoodnessCoconuts
I don't want to be attacked by a squirrel/frog thingy! ( No, I seriously got afraid at that, no joke )

Very angsty! Instead of Obi-Wan, you should use Padme!
1/31/2010 c1 Good poem
I see dead people... they tell me squirrels are stalking you, preparing for an epic war of nuts... you have been warned...

joke.

Anyways I think if you do another one, you should do Padmé.
1/31/2010 c1 1742172
Angst! You should do both other POVs. Great job!

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