for All's Fair When Love Is War11/2/2010 c6 x-love-life-x
Loving the story so far, and can't wait until I'm caught up.. Just wanted to point out one thing before I go onto the next chapter...
"Have you two misplaced an 'X' chromosome and picked up a 'Y' instead? I need something manly!"
XX is female, XY is male. So you want to switch the x and y around in the above sentence... Haha.
Loving the story so far, and can't wait until I'm caught up.. Just wanted to point out one thing before I go onto the next chapter...
"Have you two misplaced an 'X' chromosome and picked up a 'Y' instead? I need something manly!"
XX is female, XY is male. So you want to switch the x and y around in the above sentence... Haha.
11/2/2010 c2 SallSall
i still love the fact Clary wakes up to find Jace in her bed. And to top things off Izzy is smirking and teasing them about it.
i still love the fact Clary wakes up to find Jace in her bed. And to top things off Izzy is smirking and teasing them about it.
10/31/2010 c11 firecrushedcat
Well all I have to say is that this story is brilliant! Don't stop writing, but there's this thing in Ch. 10 where you wrote "Je suis Christian" which was actually supposed to be "Je m'applle Christian". Je suis is for telling people where you're from. But it's alright cause it's not very obvious. Haha good job though! :)
Well all I have to say is that this story is brilliant! Don't stop writing, but there's this thing in Ch. 10 where you wrote "Je suis Christian" which was actually supposed to be "Je m'applle Christian". Je suis is for telling people where you're from. But it's alright cause it's not very obvious. Haha good job though! :)
10/30/2010 c11 jjost26
So.. I love this story! I generally don't like AU Clary/Jace, because sometimes writers lose the characters in the non-shadowhunter world but you've done excellent! I hope you get your passion back for this story because it really truly is one of my favorites.
So.. I love this story! I generally don't like AU Clary/Jace, because sometimes writers lose the characters in the non-shadowhunter world but you've done excellent! I hope you get your passion back for this story because it really truly is one of my favorites.
10/30/2010 c11 kosmidnight
I got soooo excited when I seen this and then almost bursted into tears when I seen it wasn't a new chapter! I understand where you are coming from but please hurry! I LOVE this story!
I got soooo excited when I seen this and then almost bursted into tears when I seen it wasn't a new chapter! I understand where you are coming from but please hurry! I LOVE this story!
10/28/2010 c11 
2Booky14addict
I completely understand what your saying and though it won't be easy, i'll try to be patient and wait for the next chapter :) I hope you know that you're an awesome writer and that you get everything in order :)
2Booky14addictI completely understand what your saying and though it won't be easy, i'll try to be patient and wait for the next chapter :) I hope you know that you're an awesome writer and that you get everything in order :)
10/27/2010 c10 7MaxWaylandGrey
I really like this story. It has a great plot and I wish you could keep it going. It is incredible in all the sense of the word. :D Love it! And I love Jace in this one soo much!(: Same goes for Max.:D
-Max(:
7MaxWaylandGreyI really like this story. It has a great plot and I wish you could keep it going. It is incredible in all the sense of the word. :D Love it! And I love Jace in this one soo much!(: Same goes for Max.:D
-Max(:
10/27/2010 c4 2Booky14addict
Love it. Just love it :) A lot of stories on fanfic are great, good ideas, nice writing and everything but this one really tops the list. It gives me that excited feeling in my stomach to start reading that i've only ever felt with published books. The characters may be Clare's but the plot is all yours and i applaude you for that. Congrats on your amazing ability at writing!
2Booky14addictLove it. Just love it :) A lot of stories on fanfic are great, good ideas, nice writing and everything but this one really tops the list. It gives me that excited feeling in my stomach to start reading that i've only ever felt with published books. The characters may be Clare's but the plot is all yours and i applaude you for that. Congrats on your amazing ability at writing!
10/26/2010 c11 7CookieMonsterWillRuleTheWorld
Well your story is really awesome=] it's soo cool, you have to write more soon! it's awesome!=]
7CookieMonsterWillRuleTheWorldWell your story is really awesome=] it's soo cool, you have to write more soon! it's awesome!=]